Thoughts of You

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Thoughts of you accost my mind
leave me trembling, naked, blind
to all else except your face
and those lips I long to trace

thoughts of you accost my heart
and the beats go off the chart
all the surge of passion pounds
and my wanting need expounds

Thoughts of you accost my soul
baring not part, but the whole
every dream thus naked lies
in the gaze of wanting eyes

thoughts of you accost my thighs
make my breath escape in sighs
each one makes love to my core
and I beg for more and more

thoughts of you accost my time
turn the mundane to sublime
turn the dreary into fine
thoughts of you: my sweetest rhyme

Eileen Manassian

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 7/3/2015 9:03:00 AM
You certainly were inspired and the Rhymes flowed like an anointing oil.
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Date: 7/1/2015 7:48:00 PM
You certainly do a lot of thinking my little Desert Orchid, mind you, can't say they bad thoughts lol, btw, when are you ever mundane lol. Take care, Richard
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/2/2015 1:27:00 PM
Yes, Mr Seal. I can't seem to get this little brain of mine to quit thinking. Thank you for your visit to my poem. It's good to see you around again.
Date: 7/1/2015 8:55:00 AM
Lovely, passionate write, as expected from you, Eileen. You certainly accost the reader's senses! hugs
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/2/2015 1:30:00 PM
Thank you, Richard. I'm very grateful for your visit and kind words. blessings.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/1/2015 1:00:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. Good of you to visit. Hope all is well.
Date: 7/1/2015 7:28:00 AM
I enjoy drinking at the fountain of your words. You made excellent use of the form and left us all sated.
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Date: 6/30/2015 10:37:00 PM
Wow my sweet Eileen.. turning the mundane to sublime...love ur write dear! u never fail to awe with ur powerful emotive words!!
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Date: 6/30/2015 8:03:00 PM
This poem is divine! It is going straight into my fave's Eileen! 7
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/30/2015 9:41:00 PM
Thanks, my dear Connie. That is a great compliment. I love it when my work is treasured. Hugs to you.
Date: 6/30/2015 4:53:00 PM
My oh my so very well done, your rhymes very too sweet
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/30/2015 9:28:00 PM
Thank you, Edward. I'm glad that you liked this piece.
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