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I am pondering long ago, the sweet days of my childhood years, when life was going to last ever - How I loved the park nearby, where ducks and swans drifted peacefully on a pond, and I would pick dandelions for mom's windowsill- I can still smell the grass, and see the fish under lily pads. ____________________ December 20, 2019 Poetry/Lyric/Thoughtfully Copyright Protected ID 19-1210-338-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for FFI Blog Series 42 Brian Strand Honorable Mention

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Date: 12/20/2019 3:58:00 PM
Beautifully crafted and displayed. A wonderful poetic scene you have penned.
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Date: 12/20/2019 4:11:00 PM
Chris thank you so much for visiting with the beautiful and the compliment, appreciate !
Date: 12/20/2019 3:10:00 PM
Very Beautiful Constance
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Date: 12/20/2019 4:11:00 PM
Greg, thanks for the beautiful !
Date: 12/20/2019 2:59:00 PM
This is delicately beautiful, Constance. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 12/20/2019 4:12:00 PM
Caren thanks for the sweet compliment !

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