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Thoughtful Branches

Upon the thoughtful branches of my soul, my heart sings like a bird. I'm digging myself a lonely hole, deeper and deeper on your every word. Making myself suffer to be admired, overflowing with love no more. Oh how I long to be desired, my heart is now at war. I do imagine our footsteps in the sand, for this day was dark and cold. I reach but I can't grab your hand, I'm to deep in this hole. Everyone throws the dirt in on me, and I scream and shout. And once upon a life I struggle to be free, but no one will help me out. Is life a myth? I care not to be told, my lost self changes as I wait for the day, Upon the thoughtful branches of my soul, my heart will sing away!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/30/2008 4:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/11/2008 9:16:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/1/2008 4:30:00 PM
Cloudy - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 10/27/2008 3:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/27/2008 3:38:00 PM
Hello Cloudy Congrats on your wonderful poem making the semi-finals and best of luck in the finals!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 8/11/2008 11:14:00 AM
Hi Cloudy, Congrats on the well deserved feature of your poem Thoughtful Branches -remarkably enchanting - beautiful imagery. You have many successes to come --Mohammad
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Date: 8/11/2008 10:32:00 AM
lovely sentiments - congrats on being featured..
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Date: 8/11/2008 9:57:00 AM
Congratulations Cloudy on this emotional and well written poem being featured this week. Good luck. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/11/2008 4:51:00 AM
Beautiful poem full of emotion and straight from the heart - congrats on being featured - God Bless
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Date: 8/11/2008 3:39:00 AM
Cloudy congratulations on having your wonderful poetry featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/10/2008 5:54:00 PM
Congratulations Cloudy, on "Thoughtful Branches" being featured. Vince
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