Thought On the Write

Thought on the write


A Shower of salt,
in eyes you read?
To what seethes,
this creep.
For my Joyouse ooze,
of free verse.
A picking of placing,
the coolist stamp,
when my visions
Are danced in ink.
Spindle, full knitting,
crisscrossing the stitch.
Work chalkboard lessons,
of wisdom dismissed.
Then rhyme ends.
That most, if not all,
Take it for cable.
Granted.
You are it's god,
it's devil, and ribbon.
All in perception.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Shango Avatar
January 15, 2010 at 6:00 PM
Jonathan ... you have found immortality in the English language. This is it, my poet, friend. One love
Chircop Avatar
August 11, 2009 at 4:45 AM
its all in perception--so true- very well penned--charma
Guzzi Avatar
March 26, 2009 at 7:03 AM
Ohhh very thought provoking! Not sure I'd stay with the capitalization of every line..perhaps capitalize at the beginning of each new thought to aid the reader in understanding? Light & Love loved the sewing & wisdom & writing comparisions!
Gass Avatar
March 20, 2009 at 12:45 PM
"For my joyous ooze of free verse", "When my visions, are danced in ink", killer phrases, Johnathon! I enjoyed your "perception" very much! Thank you for your thoughtful comments! Love, Robin
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March 20, 2009 at 6:54 AM
such a wonderful perseption! ~ Arany
Devonshire Avatar
March 19, 2009 at 9:16 PM
Perception of a clear message is the best poets can hope to achieve, Jonathon. And you have certainly succeeded in this brilliant poem!
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