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Thought on the Write

Thought on the write


A Shower of salt,
in eyes you read?
To what seethes,
this creep.
For my Joyouse ooze,
of free verse.
A picking of placing,
the coolist stamp,
when my visions
Are danced in ink.
Spindle, full knitting,
crisscrossing the stitch.
Work chalkboard lessons,
of wisdom dismissed.
Then rhyme ends.
That most, if not all,
Take it for cable.
Granted.
You are it's god,
it's devil, and ribbon.
All in perception.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/15/2010 6:00:00 PM
Jonathan ... you have found immortality in the English language. This is it, my poet, friend. One love
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Date: 8/11/2009 4:45:00 AM
its all in perception--so true- very well penned--charma
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Date: 3/26/2009 7:03:00 AM
Ohhh very thought provoking! Not sure I'd stay with the capitalization of every line..perhaps capitalize at the beginning of each new thought to aid the reader in understanding? Light & Love loved the sewing & wisdom & writing comparisions!
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Date: 3/20/2009 12:45:00 PM
"For my joyous ooze of free verse", "When my visions, are danced in ink", killer phrases, Johnathon! I enjoyed your "perception" very much! Thank you for your thoughtful comments! Love, Robin
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Date: 3/20/2009 6:54:00 AM
such a wonderful perseption! ~ Arany
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Date: 3/19/2009 9:16:00 PM
Perception of a clear message is the best poets can hope to achieve, Jonathon. And you have certainly succeeded in this brilliant poem!
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