Thought of the day

simply by feeling not thinking ~ attain awareness unblinking

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Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/2/2024 12:20:00 AM

Exactlyyy, that's what I wholeheartedly believe and often find myself doing so.. It's our subconscious self that makes us aware of our own souls and what it actually craves for.. We can't reflect on our hearts by merely 'forceful thinking'.. rather than allowing ourselves to feel the emotions and processing everything, it makes most of the sense.. I love how you've written "attain awareness unblinking" Lovely hint of rhymes and alliteration there. Beautiful thought of the day!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/2/2024 3:03:00 AM

Thank you, Hiya, I’m happy you enjoyed this couplet