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As we meld with pain, to cleanse our soul’s stain ~ Nonchalance breaks the cause and effect chain 15-July-2022

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Fj Thomas

Date: 7/15/2022 5:14:00 PM

If only it were so complete with all past traumas. A balance I had to find with the nonchalance, careful not to tip into an existence of simple uncaring. I agree with Victor, truly food for thought Seeker :)

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/15/2022 6:29:00 PM

Nonchalance = Witness stance. Mind-body not subject, but an object, which eternal soul occupies temporarily for earth life experience. Thus, pain too, is witnessed, as transience is recognised, in the ebb and flow of waves flowing through linear time

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 7/15/2022 1:07:00 AM

Food for thought.