Tim Ryerson Poet Tanka

Thought I Died and Went To -

Next!...Can I help you?
Unemployed, huh? Humm, let's see
Gotta check my records here...
Nope! No openings
Directions?... Not a problem
See that sign that says - YOU'RE TOAST?

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Poet Destroyer A March 19, 2013 at 9:41 PM Hola, Tim,, who is off in dream land.... sad, sad,,, hope the toast is a good luck one... always...pd

Donna Jones March 19, 2013 at 12:49 PM Too sad too real too close to home for too many...good write Tim

Seren Roberts March 19, 2013 at 7:13 AM if your the toast who is the marmalade??? Just trying to lighten it...Seren

Eileen Manassian March 19, 2013 at 2:26 AM :( A sad write, my dear! If I were you....I'd say...I'm Toast? Bring out the jam! Let's have a party! I know...lame, but don't know what else to say...Good write, on a tough subject.