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"THE COOL" FROM MY ROOF TOP GARDEN, 06 JULY 2017, MY PHOTO, ©

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There was on a planet a smart being Who praises of his deeds liked much to sing He thought himself to be cool Though he was just a great fool For his end with his acts managed to bring! © Demetrios Trifiatis 06 July 2017

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Date: 7/7/2017 7:56:00 PM
Ooh, that really smarts! Great limerick.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/8/2017 4:21:00 AM
Thank you dearest, MLK! You so kind!
Date: 7/7/2017 9:04:00 AM
Great limerick and philosophy to go with it my friend. Alas! Pride does have a fall...Maria
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Date: 7/8/2017 4:22:00 AM
Always a delight to see you and read your comments dearest, Maria! Much appreciated my friend!
Date: 7/6/2017 1:50:00 PM
Kind of sounds like me. :) This was funny Demetrios.
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Date: 7/7/2017 1:09:00 AM
Well, Chris, I am referring to Man and his destruction of our planet and himself. Thank you!
Date: 7/6/2017 10:16:00 AM
You've a lim'rik to live for and a roof top garden to die for! I enjoy both — thanks for posting your garden photos here and fb, very much enjoyed ~ j
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Date: 7/8/2017 4:23:00 AM
Dearest LF wonderful to receive your visit and smart comment! Thank you so much my friend!
Date: 7/6/2017 7:22:00 AM
Well ... the last line invited the grin ... Nice ...
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Date: 7/6/2017 9:00:00 AM
Unfortunately, the last line is also the truth! That we are not yet in the grave should not mean that we are off the hook!Thank you my dear friend, Probir!
Date: 7/6/2017 6:05:00 AM
Lovely and humorous to boot, Demetrios!
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Date: 7/6/2017 9:02:00 AM
Thank you my dear friend, WW! Wonderful to see you again!
Date: 7/6/2017 3:22:00 AM
- Worth remembering ... well written, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/6/2017 9:03:00 AM
Wee, people rarely remember things like that! Thank you so much dear, Anne-Lise!