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"THE COOL" FROM MY ROOF TOP GARDEN, 06 JULY 2017, MY PHOTO, ©

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There was on a planet a smart being Who praises of his deeds liked much to sing He thought himself to be cool Though he was just a great fool For his end with his acts managed to bring! © Demetrios Trifiatis 06 July 2017

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 7/7/2017 7:56:00 PM

Ooh, that really smarts! Great limerick.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/8/2017 4:21:00 AM

Thank you dearest, MLK! You so kind!

Maria Williams

Date: 7/7/2017 9:04:00 AM

Great limerick and philosophy to go with it my friend. Alas! Pride does have a fall...Maria

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/8/2017 4:22:00 AM

Always a delight to see you and read your comments dearest, Maria! Much appreciated my friend!

Chris Green

Date: 7/6/2017 1:50:00 PM

Kind of sounds like me. :) This was funny Demetrios.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/7/2017 1:09:00 AM

Well, Chris, I am referring to Man and his destruction of our planet and himself. Thank you!

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 7/6/2017 10:16:00 AM

You've a lim'rik to live for and a roof top garden to die for! I enjoy both — thanks for posting your garden photos here and fb, very much enjoyed ~ j

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/8/2017 4:23:00 AM

Dearest LF wonderful to receive your visit and smart comment! Thank you so much my friend!

Probir Gupta

Date: 7/6/2017 7:22:00 AM

Well ... the last line invited the grin ... Nice ...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/6/2017 9:00:00 AM

Unfortunately, the last line is also the truth! That we are not yet in the grave should not mean that we are off the hook!Thank you my dear friend, Probir!

White Wolf

Date: 7/6/2017 6:05:00 AM

Lovely and humorous to boot, Demetrios!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/6/2017 9:02:00 AM

Thank you my dear friend, WW! Wonderful to see you again!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/6/2017 3:22:00 AM

- Worth remembering ... well written, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/6/2017 9:03:00 AM

Wee, people rarely remember things like that! Thank you so much dear, Anne-Lise!