Demetrios Trifiatis Poet Limerick

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"THE COOL" FROM MY ROOF TOP GARDEN, 06 JULY 2017, MY PHOTO, ©

Thought Himself Cool

There was on a planet a smart being

Who praises of his deeds liked much to sing

He thought himself to be cool

Though he was just a great fool 

For his end with his acts managed to bring! 







© Demetrios Trifiatis
    06 July 2017

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M. L. Kiser July 7, 2017 at 7:56 PM Ooh, that really smarts! Great limerick. Demetrios Trifiatis July 8, 2017 at 4:21 AM Thank you dearest, MLK! You so kind!

Maria Williams July 7, 2017 at 9:04 AM Great limerick and philosophy to go with it my friend. Alas! Pride does have a fall...Maria Demetrios Trifiatis July 8, 2017 at 4:22 AM Always a delight to see you and read your comments dearest, Maria! Much appreciated my friend!

Chris Green July 6, 2017 at 1:50 PM Kind of sounds like me. :) This was funny Demetrios. Demetrios Trifiatis July 7, 2017 at 1:09 AM Well, Chris, I am referring to Man and his destruction of our planet and himself. Thank you!

Lim'Rik Flats July 6, 2017 at 10:16 AM You've a lim'rik to live for and a roof top garden to die for! I enjoy both — thanks for posting your garden photos here and fb, very much enjoyed ~ j Demetrios Trifiatis July 8, 2017 at 4:23 AM Dearest LF wonderful to receive your visit and smart comment! Thank you so much my friend!

Probir Gupta July 6, 2017 at 7:22 AM Well ... the last line invited the grin ... Nice ... Demetrios Trifiatis July 6, 2017 at 9:00 AM Unfortunately, the last line is also the truth! That we are not yet in the grave should not mean that we are off the hook!Thank you my dear friend, Probir!

White Wolf July 6, 2017 at 6:05 AM Lovely and humorous to boot, Demetrios! Demetrios Trifiatis July 6, 2017 at 9:02 AM Thank you my dear friend, WW! Wonderful to see you again!

Anne-Lise Andresen July 6, 2017 at 3:22 AM - Worth remembering ... well written, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Demetrios Trifiatis July 6, 2017 at 9:03 AM Wee, people rarely remember things like that! Thank you so much dear, Anne-Lise!