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Thought Bubble

(10/09/2011) You said you’re going for other stop, When I was about to walk you home What happened? Had my thought bubble burst at the top? And scattered the words, then they roamed I just needed a friend for my lament

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Date: 9/13/2011 9:30:00 PM
Congratulation for winning in contest for Fantastic write. Enjoyed it. bl
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Date: 9/13/2011 6:25:00 PM
CONGRATS DINDA ON HM IN BUBBLES CONTEST WITH THIS SUPER COOL WRITE LUV.. ENJOY SPECIAL HONOR...
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Date: 9/12/2011 4:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Dinda! I like how the bubble thought burst and scattered :)
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Date: 9/12/2011 3:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's "Bubbles"contest Dinda. Love,Carol
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Date: 9/12/2011 3:35:00 PM
hey Dinda congrats on your win..David
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Date: 9/12/2011 3:28:00 PM
Sometimes friends abandon us when they are needed most, Dinda. I'm experiencing this right now. Excellent poem. Congratulations on your success in Deb's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/12/2011 2:58:00 PM
Good one to enter in the contest for it was on a different topic..Enjoyed..Congrats..Sara
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