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Thou Dearest Kathleen

Thou dearest, dearest Kathleen, how mine very soul doth pine for thee. How dare mine cruel sire deign to gaol thee and cleave our love asunder! Let not thine heart be vexed one whit that I was a party to this dastardly plot! Night and day I pace these musty castle halls with thee e'er on mine mind. Thou must have faith that one day I'll rescue thee from thy wretched plight, That thou shalt be forever mine beautiful princess and I thy faithful knight! Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved

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Harry Horsman

Date: 3/8/2012 4:04:00 PM

Love this Robert, versification of the highest order. harry

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/8/2012 3:51:00 PM

a different renaissance kind of gem from you, robert... i like the way this ended!... best wishes and huggs! :)

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/8/2012 7:24:00 AM

Now this is how the master writes!! I don't speak or write in that language..u graced this contest with a wonderful entry...I think Kathleen, if she were really REAL, would feel relieved!! ha ha. HIgh five, Robert! Hello to Miss Vera this a.m. too! Gwendolen

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/8/2012 6:20:00 AM

Awesome, Sarge. Excellent entry. Reads like a winner. Good luck. Glad to hear things are going well at your house. Una's doing a lot better. Starting to eat better and gaining some weight back. Still a ways to go, but improving daily. Best to you and Vera. God bless and be well. Una/Ralphie

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/7/2012 11:12:00 PM

Enjoyed this vibrant piece Bob, it echo's throughout its lines with pathos loss and hope..)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2012 11:09:00 PM

WEll, I think you got this one in the bag, Bobert!! (did I get that name right, haha!) THat dear Kathleen, wow,!!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/7/2012 9:38:00 PM

Bob u certainly took this poem to a new level with language and presenting the theme for Michael's contest.. good luck.. so happy to hear Vera is doing well.. have run into some issues lately ..but keepin' the faith luv.. what say u about Peyton? whih team do u think will tempt him? methinks.. Jets.. as he wants to play for AFC.. oh..

Glenn Sentes

Date: 3/7/2012 7:30:00 PM

You'll always be my favorite poet, Sir Robert! God bless!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/7/2012 6:48:00 PM

Always the top of your game my friend. Hope your well. Your friend Michael