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Those Ol' Creaky Stairs

Those ol' creaky stairs have seen better days. The varnish withers as the worn wood decays. I look at them at times and want to repaint so that the evident lines seen are far-more faint. Last week I walked up them and felt them sinking, but then later that day I sat on the couch thinking. Maybe those lines mean that they envelope charm. I saw something beautiful, not something of harm. I recall the first Christmas we shared as a family, my daughter ran down them excited in glee. Her feet so tiny, yet loud as she was racing down those ol' stairs I thought needed refacing. How my sweet boy Bo used hurry in the morn. Later in his life he struggled down them forlorn. But they remind me of his youth as strong pup, not when he was old and could no longer climb up. They are noisy at night when others are sleeping, and all the God-awful days of the dog hair sweeping. I miss that dog hair and those tiny feet dashing, the annoying sound of Ella’s sassy feet bashing. Now I see the beauty in those old creaky stairs, but to those indelible memories nothing compares. So, I shall keep them as they are, so ol' and tattered, knowing that the love they endured is all that mattered. *Because of this contest I now love my stairs* September 28, 2018

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Date: 2/18/2019 2:46:00 PM
Good seeing this one again, a winner in Mark's contest. Congrats,Luloo
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Date: 2/13/2019 7:54:00 PM
Back with more congrats on your win, LuLoo.
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Date: 2/13/2019 6:44:00 PM
Lu Loo, I love your stairs now too :) Congratulations on your win on Mile 17 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest! Thank you so much for supporting my contests. By continuing to place in the contests you are accumulating points toward the final. ~Mark
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Date: 2/9/2019 7:05:00 AM
Wow! Congratulations. Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you.
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Date: 2/8/2019 5:44:00 PM
aww I have a huge lump in my throat luloo and you always have those precious memories of your Bo every time you step on the stairs. many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/8/2019 1:56:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, LuLoo LOVELY! Janice
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Date: 2/7/2019 11:31:00 PM
Awesome imagery, Lu Loo. Congrats on your well deserved podium finish.
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Date: 2/7/2019 10:58:00 PM
I loved this poem. Such a profound meaning placed upon the house stairs. Congrats on your second place finish in my contest.
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Date: 10/28/2018 2:50:00 PM
what a wonderful way to fall in love with your stairs. To remember all these treasured things and do it in such a lovely poetic way. I see i am first to comment. This is one of the best poems I have seen today. Thanks for my placement. I am glad I could finally use my ivory poem.
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Date: 10/29/2018 5:45:00 AM
thank you and you are welcome sweet lady!!! :)-luloo

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