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Those Little Silver Things

Running through the forest on feet of clay wet to the skin claiming every animal heartbeat as my own imbued in soil thirsting like a wolf the goatskin drum beats, on and on Wild berries and wild boars, a mystical sun pulsing like an escutcheon badge shielding my heart I savor each moment, as if it were my last tryst with destiny ; Cupping the earth with my bare hands I inhale the ironed nickel with all its liquid outer core Night arrives and as those little silver things jostle in the sky, fighting for their right to be light I race, rush and hurry onward while the goatskin drum beats, on and on and on. By: Mystic Rose April 13, 2022

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Date: 4/20/2022 9:12:00 AM
Dear Rose, your adventurous heart runs with wild abandon across the poetic page.. "claiming every animal heartbeat as my own" - that thought embraces me so! I adore the free, yet appreciative, spirit of this poem.. "Wild berries and wild boars" captures such a delicious and untamed exhilaration experienced "while the goatskin drum beats, on and on and on". The potent power of your drum beats brings me there with you, "Running through the forest on feet of clay" Fantastic transcendent poetry, my dear friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 4/18/2022 11:06:00 AM
Attractive title and beautiful writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/14/2022 11:10:00 AM
Great imagery! … Wild berries and wild boars!
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Date: 4/14/2022 11:04:00 AM
wow, love the feeling and imagery in this verse. Well done my friend. Have a wonderful Easter
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Date: 4/14/2022 9:03:00 AM
Quite a mystic poem. I have now clicked on follow poet..
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Date: 4/14/2022 9:21:00 AM
Thank you Victor, I just figured out what you meant by follower list, this is all new to me, thanks
Date: 4/14/2022 9:01:00 AM
Reminds me very much of the spirit driving me when I wrote a poem about the Code Talkers. This is very inspiring poetry. One with Mother Earth and Sky. Love it!
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Date: 4/14/2022 2:38:00 AM
You truly write of a great adventure here, Vie:) Nice one:)
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Date: 4/14/2022 8:13:00 AM
Thank you Jo for stopping by have great day !

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