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Those Eyes That Grin

For Timothy Lee His grin melted me His blue eyes captivated I was drawn to him His manly presence shook me to my knees. His boldness sent my flesh nerves on spree. I shall always hold tight his first bold words, "You love me, you just do not know it yet." I have waited a fragile lifetime. I have dreamed beyond infinite dreams. He was frequently at friends of mine. Always intent on his flirting scheme, He pursued me with a steady gleam. Now our love is a fulfilling theme.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/16/2016 7:23:00 PM

CayCay, Congratulations on your "Poet's Dozen 2: First date" WIN!!! Love ~ LINDA ~

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/9/2016 7:50:00 PM

Love reading 'bout your lovin' CayCay! Nicely done and with a happy ending! Congrats on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra

Lin Lane

Date: 1/9/2016 6:35:00 PM

Crazy bout your lovin, CayCay. Well done.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/9/2016 6:22:00 PM

A successful first date and win. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/9/2016 5:46:00 PM

I gotta go see the placement you got. Anyway, I can see it won, and deservedly so. Congrats, my friend. I finished my school work and now I can run to the store. I've developed a touch of a cold!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/9/2016 5:46:00 PM

I gotta go see the placement you got. Anyway, I can see it won, and deservedly so. Congrats, my friend. I finished my school work and now I can run to the store. I've developed a touch of a cold!

Lu Loo

Date: 1/9/2016 4:12:00 PM

Awww CayCay, very sweet :) "His manly presence shook me to my knees. His boldness saw my flesh nerves start to seize." Love this, my fav verse..Congrats on your placement!! :)-luloo *smiles*

Skat A

Date: 1/9/2016 3:41:00 PM

CayCay, Congrats on your win. SKAT

Dan Cwiak

Date: 1/9/2016 2:36:00 PM

A wonderful tribute to the one who rocked your core. It just shows that there can be love at first sight, which I wish I had the chance to experience. Great write, CayCay. Good luck in the contest!

Legendary Legend

Date: 1/8/2016 1:03:00 AM

great write....a 7

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/6/2016 8:50:00 PM

This is SO CUTE< CayCAY. I am proud to be the first to leave a comment here. I also love the cute title. The part where you said you didn't know you loved him yet. That was special!! Hope you are doing ok, sweetie. I'm off here now. Time to make dinner.