Those Blue Jean Summers

We owned the world, we owned the sun
They were blue-jean summers, jam-packed with fun
Way back when I was nine or ten
How great it was to be a kid!
Where knees fell down, and bums would skid
Down asphalt roads, when life was good
We called ourselves blue denim twins

Summer mornings, flies were buzzin'.
Grab our bikes, and take a ride
And eat our lunch 'neath steel blue skies
Wipe sticky hands on blue jean thighs

Drink a gulp of Lipton tea
Sweetened with love, for you and me
The radio played those Elvis songs 
A "send-off" smile, a day for fun

Running down the road, one mishap or a fall...
Band-aid & bubble gum, soon fixed our frowns
A patch on your skin and one on your jeans
We wore them with honor, but, we were teased!

Skating down the sidewalk, going clickity-clack
Stepping on the cracks will break your mother's back
Later playing jacks, counting threes and fours
Sitting cross legged on the kitchen floor


When dinner was ready, we'd be in luck
Spaghetti to twirl, and peach short cake
We owned the sun, we owned the world
Those blue jean summers, when we were friends…

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/28/2013 9:43:00 PM
it taste sweet... congrats...Linda
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Date: 3/28/2013 3:25:00 PM
Thank you for entering my contest
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Date: 3/25/2013 2:49:00 PM
Outstanding, Carrie. Congrats. Well done. Nice going, my friend. Kudos. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 3/25/2013 8:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your great summer poem carrie ...Donna
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Date: 6/15/2011 5:20:00 PM
Cool Carrie..Congratulations on a big win
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Date: 6/15/2011 1:50:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this excellent one..Sara
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Date: 6/15/2011 12:17:00 PM
What a great memory you brought to life through these winning words!
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Date: 6/15/2011 10:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Jeans" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/15/2011 9:33:00 AM
First place and first rate, Carrie! Congratulations. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/15/2011 8:58:00 AM
Many congrats to you on both your wins, Carrie : )
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Date: 6/15/2011 7:46:00 AM
Congrats on your very well deserved 1st place win Carrie,, wonderful memories of those blue jean summers.love, gautami
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Date: 6/15/2011 7:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win! I like the lipton tea verse the best, although your whole poem reeks (in a good way) of good times :)
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Date: 6/15/2011 6:27:00 AM
My congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Carrie
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Date: 6/15/2011 5:50:00 AM
ohh such a ripe and lovely memory! I really liked the skate verse..you should do another telling about those old fashioned skates! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 6/14/2011 11:54:00 PM
Lovely poem here Carrie.Congrats on your 1st place win.
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Date: 6/14/2011 10:09:00 PM
A great poem Carrie and great win. congratulations on your first place. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/14/2011 9:20:00 PM
Awwww, I love it. And I remember that step on a crack, break your mama's back! this is adorable. Congratulations.
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Date: 6/14/2011 8:23:00 PM
Congrats on your first place win Carrie with this perfect write on blue jeans luv..
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Date: 6/14/2011 12:50:00 PM
So, I put on my blue jeans and ... "May I come and play with you, dear beautiful poetess?" Love, iolanda
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Date: 6/14/2011 12:49:00 PM
Ok, Carrie, I just put on my jeans and " May I come and play with you? :) Love your Vers Libre, dear beautiful poetess. Iolanda
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Date: 6/14/2011 12:48:00 PM
Ok, Carrie, I just put on my jeans and " May I come and play with you? :) Love your Vers Libre, dear beautiful poetess. Iolanda
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Date: 6/14/2011 11:03:00 AM
Carrie, what wonderful memories you have of the "blue jean summers." If we had grown up nearby, I would have gone riding with you. Exquisite description of your mother listening to the radio, the bumps and falls you took as you rode and eating the lunch your mom prepared. It doesn't get any better than this, Carrie. Surely a winner! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/13/2011 11:55:00 AM
Beautiful free verse dear poet...again, brightening my day with memorries ! Have a great day, full of thoughts ! Much love, james
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Date: 6/13/2011 10:15:00 AM
LOVE IT ..BLESS UP
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