Get Your Premium Membership

Those Blue Jean Summers

We owned the world, we owned the sun They were blue-jean summers, jam-packed with fun Way back when I was nine or ten How great it was to be a kid! Where knees fell down, and bums would skid Down asphalt roads, when life was good We called ourselves blue denim twins Summer mornings, flies were buzzin'. Grab our bikes, and take a ride And eat our lunch 'neath steel blue skies Wipe sticky hands on blue jean thighs Drink a gulp of Lipton tea Sweetened with love, for you and me The radio played those Elvis songs A "send-off" smile, a day for fun Running down the road, one mishap or a fall... Band-aid & bubble gum, soon fixed our frowns A patch on your skin and one on your jeans We wore them with honor, but, we were teased! Skating down the sidewalk, going clickity-clack Stepping on the cracks will break your mother's back Later playing jacks, counting threes and fours Sitting cross legged on the kitchen floor When dinner was ready, we'd be in luck Spaghetti to twirl, and peach short cake We owned the sun, we owned the world Those blue jean summers, when we were friends… +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/28/2013 9:43:00 PM
it taste sweet... congrats...Linda
Login to Reply
Date: 3/28/2013 3:25:00 PM
Thank you for entering my contest
Login to Reply
Date: 3/25/2013 2:49:00 PM
Outstanding, Carrie. Congrats. Well done. Nice going, my friend. Kudos. hugs, Ralph
Login to Reply
Date: 3/25/2013 8:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your great summer poem carrie ...Donna
Login to Reply
Date: 6/15/2011 5:20:00 PM
Cool Carrie..Congratulations on a big win
Login to Reply
Date: 6/15/2011 1:50:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this excellent one..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 6/15/2011 12:17:00 PM
What a great memory you brought to life through these winning words!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/15/2011 10:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Jeans" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 6/15/2011 9:33:00 AM
First place and first rate, Carrie! Congratulations. Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 6/15/2011 8:58:00 AM
Many congrats to you on both your wins, Carrie : )
Login to Reply
Date: 6/15/2011 7:46:00 AM
Congrats on your very well deserved 1st place win Carrie,, wonderful memories of those blue jean summers.love, gautami
Login to Reply
Date: 6/15/2011 7:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win! I like the lipton tea verse the best, although your whole poem reeks (in a good way) of good times :)
Login to Reply
Date: 6/15/2011 6:27:00 AM
My congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Carrie
Login to Reply
Date: 6/15/2011 5:50:00 AM
ohh such a ripe and lovely memory! I really liked the skate verse..you should do another telling about those old fashioned skates! Congrad's Light & Love
Login to Reply
Date: 6/14/2011 11:54:00 PM
Lovely poem here Carrie.Congrats on your 1st place win.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/14/2011 10:09:00 PM
A great poem Carrie and great win. congratulations on your first place. Love, Joyce
Login to Reply
Date: 6/14/2011 9:20:00 PM
Awwww, I love it. And I remember that step on a crack, break your mama's back! this is adorable. Congratulations.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/14/2011 8:23:00 PM
Congrats on your first place win Carrie with this perfect write on blue jeans luv..
Login to Reply
Date: 6/14/2011 12:50:00 PM
So, I put on my blue jeans and ... "May I come and play with you, dear beautiful poetess?" Love, iolanda
Login to Reply
Date: 6/14/2011 12:49:00 PM
Ok, Carrie, I just put on my jeans and " May I come and play with you? :) Love your Vers Libre, dear beautiful poetess. Iolanda
Login to Reply
Date: 6/14/2011 12:48:00 PM
Ok, Carrie, I just put on my jeans and " May I come and play with you? :) Love your Vers Libre, dear beautiful poetess. Iolanda
Login to Reply
Date: 6/14/2011 11:03:00 AM
Carrie, what wonderful memories you have of the "blue jean summers." If we had grown up nearby, I would have gone riding with you. Exquisite description of your mother listening to the radio, the bumps and falls you took as you rode and eating the lunch your mom prepared. It doesn't get any better than this, Carrie. Surely a winner! Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 6/13/2011 11:55:00 AM
Beautiful free verse dear poet...again, brightening my day with memorries ! Have a great day, full of thoughts ! Much love, james
Login to Reply
Date: 6/13/2011 10:15:00 AM
LOVE IT ..BLESS UP
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things