Those Blue Jean Summers

We owned the world, we owned the sun
They were blue-jean summers, jam-packed with fun
Way back when I was nine or ten
How great it was to be a kid!
Where knees fell down, and bums would skid
Down asphalt roads, when life was good
We called ourselves blue denim twins

Summer mornings, flies were buzzin'.
Grab our bikes, and take a ride
And eat our lunch 'neath steel blue skies
Wipe sticky hands on blue jean thighs

Drink a gulp of Lipton tea
Sweetened with love, for you and me
The radio played those Elvis songs 
A "send-off" smile, a day for fun

Running down the road, one mishap or a fall...
Band-aid & bubble gum, soon fixed our frowns
A patch on your skin and one on your jeans
We wore them with honor, but, we were teased!

Skating down the sidewalk, going clickity-clack
Stepping on the cracks will break your mother's back
Later playing jacks, counting threes and fours
Sitting cross legged on the kitchen floor


When dinner was ready, we'd be in luck
Spaghetti to twirl, and peach short cake
We owned the sun, we owned the world
Those blue jean summers, when we were friends…

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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March 28, 2013 at 9:43 PM
it taste sweet... congrats...Linda
Konos Avatar
March 28, 2013 at 3:25 PM
Thank you for entering my contest
Taylor Avatar
March 25, 2013 at 2:49 PM
Outstanding, Carrie. Congrats. Well done. Nice going, my friend. Kudos. hugs, Ralph
Jones Avatar
March 25, 2013 at 8:20 AM
Congratulations on your great summer poem carrie ...Donna
Dufresne Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 5:20 PM
Cool Carrie..Congratulations on a big win
Kendrick Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 1:50 PM
Congrats on your win with this excellent one..Sara
Fassbender Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 12:17 PM
What a great memory you brought to life through these winning words!
Brown Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 10:10 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Jeans" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 9:33 AM
First place and first rate, Carrie! Congratulations. Love, Carolyn
Horne Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 8:58 AM
Many congrats to you on both your wins, Carrie : )
Phookan Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 7:46 AM
Congrats on your very well deserved 1st place win Carrie,, wonderful memories of those blue jean summers.love, gautami
Susan Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 7:33 AM
Congratulations on your first place win! I like the lipton tea verse the best, although your whole poem reeks (in a good way) of good times :)
Mehta Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 6:27 AM
My congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Carrie
Guzzi Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 5:50 AM
ohh such a ripe and lovely memory! I really liked the skate verse..you should do another telling about those old fashioned skates! Congrad's Light & Love
Poet Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 11:54 PM
Lovely poem here Carrie.Congrats on your 1st place win.
Johnson Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 10:09 PM
A great poem Carrie and great win. congratulations on your first place. Love, Joyce
Dietrich Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 9:20 PM
Awwww, I love it. And I remember that step on a crack, break your mama's back! this is adorable. Congratulations.
Sweetheart Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 8:23 PM
Congrats on your first place win Carrie with this perfect write on blue jeans luv..
Scripca Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 12:50 PM
So, I put on my blue jeans and ... "May I come and play with you, dear beautiful poetess?" Love, iolanda
Scripca Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 12:49 PM
Ok, Carrie, I just put on my jeans and " May I come and play with you? :) Love your Vers Libre, dear beautiful poetess. Iolanda
Scripca Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 12:48 PM
Ok, Carrie, I just put on my jeans and " May I come and play with you? :) Love your Vers Libre, dear beautiful poetess. Iolanda
Devonshire Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 11:03 AM
Carrie, what wonderful memories you have of the "blue jean summers." If we had grown up nearby, I would have gone riding with you. Exquisite description of your mother listening to the radio, the bumps and falls you took as you rode and eating the lunch your mom prepared. It doesn't get any better than this, Carrie. Surely a winner! Love, Carolyn
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June 13, 2011 at 11:55 AM
Beautiful free verse dear poet...again, brightening my day with memorries ! Have a great day, full of thoughts ! Much love, james
Beadnall Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 10:15 AM
LOVE IT ..BLESS UP
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