This Won'T Be Long

To my little angels,
I will be gone for a while.
This won't be long, promise I'll be back soon.
I'll just go somewhere, that isn't far.
I'll go beneath myself, I'll soar in the wind up high.
I will take a journey all alone...
But I will bring all your smiles in my heart.
Your sweet kisses and warmest hugs.
Your smells inside my pocket.
Your endless demand when I'm awake.
And promise, I will always blow a kiss in heaven.
To send you everyday when you awoke.
I wanna buried myself for a meantime.
To kill all pain that I feel.
To once again, to have myself be born.
To create a new person in me.
A stronger one, a better might be.
I will reflect all the wrong that I've done.
Then forgive myself, let the sorrow be gone.
And weigh what's the best to choose.
Is it the life with someone who drowned me in tears,
Or a life with my children, alone and free.
I'll be gone for awhile to surrender myself to,
In the arms of a loving Father, I'll ask the courage.
To surpass this challenge he let me into.
And when I wake up one day, then find my way home.
I hope to see your smiles, embracing me 'til tomorrow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 4/30/2014 2:46:00 PM
Hello Aiyah, Not to sound redundant. But geez was this ever beautiful!! I wish it wasn't so sad. But it bears a soul. True and relevant. Thank you for sharing this beautiful heart full write with us all here, Peace, Deborah
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/2/2014 3:31:00 PM
Hi Deb.. thank you for a kind visit and comment my friend~~ :O))
Date: 3/22/2014 6:11:00 AM
You are a great writer I like your writings and thank you for reading my poems I added you to my favorites
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/25/2014 3:09:00 PM
wow!! this is great ,KietH!!! ,,,my honor to be one on your lists!!! ThaNk yoU sooo mucH!!! =O))
Date: 3/18/2014 7:38:00 PM
I don't know what prompted these words but they make me very sad! Please tell me whatever is causing your to write this, will end you will once again be free of this burden! XOXOXOX
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/19/2014 8:20:00 AM
Hey Jack.. don't worry 'bout me.. ;')) sorry if I made you sad... that's I didn't make it longer... cause i might cause a river of tears.. lol.. THANK YOU for a kind visit my frienD :')) ^_^_
Date: 3/18/2014 1:53:00 PM
Having to leave your children is a painful experience for any mother. You have described it all decently well in this write.
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/18/2014 1:58:00 PM
ThaNk you, Robert for this wonderful message.. :')) i appreciate it so mucH!! ^__^
Date: 3/18/2014 12:27:00 PM
This is a Faith I understand. I love how you embracethe details of your children in this moving write my friend. J.A.B.
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/18/2014 12:52:00 PM
Hey, JustiN!!! ..it's you again, my dear... ThaNK YoU!!! ^__^.. they are the reason why i survive... :"))
Date: 3/18/2014 11:05:00 AM
Very heartfelt...and yet, somehow, so sad. But you speak of the future with hope. That makes for a positive ending, I presume. // paul
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/18/2014 11:59:00 AM
ThaNk you, PauL.. :')) though i'm broken...I know it'll come a time..that all things will be fine.. and will back into normal.. ^_^
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