This Weeping Love


this sad heart
broken heart
heart aching
heart delicate and weeping
weeping lost love
weeping to God
God Almighty
God can you hear this girl
girl of sadness
girl of love
love mine
love like a sword
sword that stabs my heart
sword of love's memory
memory that comes in dreams
memory and family secrets
secrets hidden
secrets from the past
past buried
past dead with the beloved
beloved that lay in death
beloved family husband and baby
baby who never saw the sky
baby oh the love
love locked within
love that inspires me to write poems
poems from my dripping pen
poems of love
love and sorrow written in blood
love has made me this poet
poet of painted words
poet of rhyme and verse
verses of love
verses of love flowing
flowing and floating for eternity
flowing with love and forlorn beauty
beauty is poetry
beauty in natures scenery
scenery to take your breath away
scenery down a beaten path
path winding in a forest
path to love
endless
endless the poems of love
love and love
love of a broken heart
heart bleeding
weeping
bleeding  . . .


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May 18, 2015


Poetry/Blitz/This Weeping Love
Copyright Protected, ID 15-696-418-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

Submitted to the contest, Best Love Poem #2, 
sponsor, Skat

Third Place

deathlost loveblitz

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Kp Nunez

Date: 8/7/2015 7:11:00 AM

Awesome blitz, Broken. Congratulations! hugs

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/7/2015 12:52:00 AM

Heartfelt write broken although sad, Congrats on ur win!

Skat A

Date: 8/6/2015 7:56:00 PM

Broken. Congratulations on your awesome win ----------SKAT

Thomas Martin

Date: 8/1/2015 12:20:00 PM

7+++ Simply beautiful and memorable, so very touching, Constance! Cannot say enough. . .

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/1/2015 12:20:00 PM

- A wonderful write about: "love of a broken heart" - I wish you luck in the contest B.W. ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eric Boddie

Date: 8/1/2015 10:12:00 AM

wow bw, you never cease to amaze....while reading this, I felt somewhat dazed....stunned by both, form and content....it is apparent to me that these particular words must have been Heaven Sent....;)