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this sad heart broken heart heart aching heart delicate and weeping weeping lost love weeping to God God Almighty God can you hear this girl girl of sadness girl of love love mine love like a sword sword that stabs my heart sword of love's memory memory that comes in dreams memory and family secrets secrets hidden secrets from the past past buried past dead with the beloved beloved that lay in death beloved family husband and baby baby who never saw the sky baby oh the love love locked within love that inspires me to write poems poems from my dripping pen poems of love love and sorrow written in blood love has made me this poet poet of painted words poet of rhyme and verse verses of love verses of love flowing flowing and floating for eternity flowing with love and forlorn beauty beauty is poetry beauty in natures scenery scenery to take your breath away scenery down a beaten path path winding in a forest path to love endless endless the poems of love love and love love of a broken heart heart bleeding weeping bleeding . . . ___________________________ May 18, 2015 Poetry/Blitz/This Weeping Love Copyright Protected, ID 15-696-418-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Best Love Poem #2, sponsor, Skat Third Place

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Date: 8/7/2015 7:11:00 AM
Awesome blitz, Broken. Congratulations! hugs
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Date: 8/7/2015 12:52:00 AM
Heartfelt write broken although sad, Congrats on ur win!
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Date: 8/6/2015 7:56:00 PM
Broken. Congratulations on your awesome win ----------SKAT
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Date: 8/1/2015 12:20:00 PM
7+++ Simply beautiful and memorable, so very touching, Constance! Cannot say enough. . .
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Date: 8/1/2015 12:20:00 PM
- A wonderful write about: "love of a broken heart" - I wish you luck in the contest B.W. ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/1/2015 10:12:00 AM
wow bw, you never cease to amaze....while reading this, I felt somewhat dazed....stunned by both, form and content....it is apparent to me that these particular words must have been Heaven Sent....;)
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Date: 8/1/2015 7:43:00 AM
Oh Broken Wings the raw emotions flow so freely - have never tried this form before - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx7
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