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This Twilight Sky Sent At the Right Time

Augustus’ favorite heaven… A pumpkin twilight sky with a daub of purple Dash of rose pink, wafting across the sleepy sky Perchance an angel has been painting? Happenstance being what she is, My heart flutters with unannounced joy Wiping a dank day from my memory, Soothing my heart. Archangel Michael whispers a gentleness I needed. An act of folly has held me hostage In the throes of the throes of my most unhappy self. But this twilight sky, sent at exactly the right time Is soothing my spirit in heavenly ways…..delighting me so. Written: February 2, 2019 Contest: 8 Word Challenge - Bardenesque Sponsor: John Hamilton

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Date: 2/23/2019 10:55:00 PM
Such rich color and feeling Caren, enjoyed the read, congrats!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/24/2019 9:39:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sheri. I had fun trying to be fancy with this one. I had to write a huge word list, captured from fancy poet's poems before I could begin.
Date: 2/21/2019 5:41:00 PM
Well done Caren congrats on a fine win!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/21/2019 9:15:00 PM
Thank you John. I appreciate it. I had no idea.
Date: 2/4/2019 6:45:00 AM
Too beautiful; had to "fav"; good luck.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/4/2019 7:03:00 AM
Thank you M.L. This kind of poetry was a real STRETCH for me. I love it, but it is difficult to do. Not easy at all.

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