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This Tear I Shed

This tear I cry
It is not just for me
For this tear I do not
Shed but release
And that which we release
Is a freedom shared
Forgiveness travels
An eternity….

feelingsforgivenessfreedomhurtlovefree verse

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Susan Ashley

October 10, 2018 at 9:12 PM

The power of forgiveness, for both the giver and the receiver, is a profound gift to be granted and to be shared. There is so much beauty and intensity in the emotional spirit of your poem, Joe. Enlightened poetry. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Lawrence Sharp

October 10, 2018 at 10:12 AM

Releasing the tear rather than shedding it... nice perspective, nicely expressed.

M. L. Kiser

October 10, 2018 at 8:00 AM

This is so true; it does free one to forgive, as well as, the forgiven. Beautifully penned. "And that which we release Is a freedom shared Forgiveness travels An eternity…."

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