This Tear

This tear                                  So tightly held these salty tears                           
so tight my eyes squeeze                   embracing the We like long lost love
and yet you fall, fall with a weight            of remembrance returning to the earth
  of cares sinking in a fathomless lake of woe            moistening it without glaze.

This tear                                           Flicked freely from the corner of mother’s eye
dropping with pointed precision       upon pearl white cheek     flying momentarily...
  or running childishly from the tip    on the fingertips of joy 
beside a chocolate brown nose. Or in gasps of anguish too great for arms to hold      
Circles the world with the bounty of heart…

When released from imprisoned  chest
           bodes more than woe. 
                                  This tear defines the humanity of man.

Poet: Debbie Guzzi
Contest: Personify a Tear

* Do to the 12 line requirement this verse has been altered to be read both left to right and from top to bottom.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 4/26/2011 4:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Debbie. I am sorry for the late comment but still having problems with the Soup since they worked on it. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/22/2011 4:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this very creative work..Sara
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Date: 4/22/2011 2:30:00 PM
Wow. You are seriously brilliant. Congrats Debbie gal, this is one exquisite work of art. Thanks for your thoughtful congrats too, so appreciated. Not sure really where I am, but it feels good to be near old friends. Warm hugs, shar xoxo
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Date: 4/22/2011 11:52:00 AM
Awesome Debbie, congratulations on your win in HG's contest ;)
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Date: 4/22/2011 10:42:00 AM
Amazing poetry!Congrats Debbie on your win--kashinath
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Date: 4/22/2011 7:31:00 AM
Wow....I have read it both ways.....you are too amazing!!!! How you always excel....you must have been a whiz in school !!
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Date: 4/22/2011 4:19:00 AM
Cngratulations on the third place win in the contest, Debbie
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Date: 4/22/2011 4:18:00 AM
Congrats Debbie on your amazing winning poem in HG's contest on tears.. most expressive as u gave the tear a personality luv.. enjoy your top spot .. as u enjoy a Happy Easter celelbration with luv..
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Date: 4/21/2011 11:35:00 PM
Deb, you put a lot of hard work into your craft. Congratulaton to you here. You said so much with this inventive form!
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Date: 4/21/2011 9:51:00 PM
An amazing form and write debbie. Many congrats, Have a blessed Easter.
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Date: 4/21/2011 9:25:00 PM
Congratulations Debbie. This is delighfully interesting in its design. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/21/2011 9:16:00 PM
Dear Light and LOVE, Deborah, Thank-YOU for Supporting My Contest " Personify A Tear " Congratulations on YOUR 3rd Place Win LOVE ALWAYS, YOUR Liege...Harry (HG
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Date: 3/31/2011 2:37:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today and I'm looking forward to reading more. Take care. Dana'lynn
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Date: 3/31/2011 2:20:00 PM
AWESOME. HG WILL JUST LOVE THIS. Written in the style he perfected. YOU GO GIRL. Lainie PS; THE LAST LINE IS A KILLER. I SUBMITTED A CONCRETE I WROTE AGES AGO HERE AT THE SOUP. IT STILL APPLIES TO MY TAKE ON TEARS.
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Date: 3/31/2011 8:25:00 AM
This is for sure a fantastic display of free verse Debbie...and the thought with its poetic write makes for great reading ! Have a great day dear poet...and that you are ! Much love, james
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Date: 3/31/2011 7:44:00 AM
Wow you did an excellent write here Deb. love phyl
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Date: 3/31/2011 5:50:00 AM
Extremely well written here. "The humanity of man", indeed.
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Date: 3/31/2011 5:17:00 AM
This is an excellent write Debbie!Liked it ---kashinath
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Date: 3/30/2011 9:42:00 PM
WOW .. this is deeply felt Debbie .. such impressive lines luv.. good luck in the contest.. better check again..think it is max 12 lines unless I read it wrong luv.. simply amazing..
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Date: 3/30/2011 8:46:00 PM
This is lovely, HG will love it. BG
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Date: 3/30/2011 7:42:00 PM
Dear Light and LOVE , Deborah, Beautiful POEM Please do not take it off the Contest I Wrote a Blog Tonight when I got Home About the CONTEST While I was writing it, I got 9 Entrees, YOURS being one of Them Written From the Heart If there was no rule to Follow, How can YOU be Wrong ALL My LOVE,ALWAYS and FOREVER...HG Harry
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Date: 3/30/2011 3:07:00 PM
Very creative work..Good luck in the contest with this sure winner..Sara
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Date: 3/30/2011 2:55:00 PM
this is great Debbie, best of luck in the contest
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