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In my bed I got to lay And hope to dream the day away This waking side is not for me For I don't see like others see

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Date: 10/7/2017 8:57:00 AM
Interesting first post Kristen.. Welcome to poetry soup..
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Date: 10/7/2017 2:52:00 AM
I am not sure I completely understand, but that's ok. I like a little mystery in a poem. Your rhyme is good, and there's a nice cadence to it. Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
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