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This poem doesn’t want to get written. It’s fighting with all that it’s got. Apostrophes, commas, Their daddies and mamas Are joining to give it a shot. I’m dragging each word that’s resisting And plunking it down on the page. So every letter I’ve forced, with a fetter, To take its place up on the stage. This poem didn’t want to get written. Its protests were lusty and loud But the pencil I wield Made hostilities yield For the poet’s compulsion’s unbowed.

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Pat Adams

Date: 2/21/2018 6:00:00 PM

It's seems there is no end to your wonderful imagination. I enjoyed this very much and know what you mean. I put them aside and try something else till the words come to me but sometimes it just doesn't work. Very well written and easy to relate to!!..................pat

Robert Johnson

Date: 2/17/2018 3:53:00 PM

Normally, you make it look so easy. So it only stands to reason that you would have to word for it once in a while. :)

Ilene Bauer
Date: 2/17/2018 5:08:00 PM

ha! it's interesting that you say that, robert. my poems do sometimes just flow out of me, but lately i find myself struggling with many of them. your constant support is very gratifying and i thank you for it...

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 2/15/2018 10:37:00 PM

I know exactly what you means in this work, Ilene. My solution is simple: I put it aside and return to it later. Sometimes that works, other times it doesn't, in which case I trash it and forget it. / M

Ilene Bauer
Date: 2/17/2018 5:07:00 PM

i sometimes do that, too, maurice. it's always so nice to hear from you...

FJ Thomas

Date: 2/14/2018 8:24:00 PM

OH I LOVE THIS ILENE!!!! FIRE FIRE PIECE!

Ilene Bauer
Date: 2/17/2018 5:04:00 PM

thank you, shadow of the past, for taking the time to read and comment...

Leo Larry Amadore

Date: 2/14/2018 7:52:00 PM

Don't let the resistance of one recalcitrant poem prevent you from writing and posting your always amusing and well-crafted work! Good write, Ilene.

Ilene Bauer
Date: 2/17/2018 5:04:00 PM

thank you for your support, leo larry! i appreciate it very much...