This Pale Imitation of a Poet

This pale imitation of a poet
Endeavering to relate emotions
Unknowingly bears a soul that is lost
To those that have to bear their own cross

Endeavering to relate emotions
Opening myself up to introspection
To those that have to bear their own cross
Reading my meanderings takes courage

Opening myself up to introspection
I find all the chinks in my hard armour
Reading my meanderings takes courage
Some revelations are better left dead

I find all the chinks in my hard armour
Tears at times are known to rust through
Some revelations are better left dead
memories make you see your truth

Tears at times are known to rust through
Other emotions follow the path
Memories make you see your truth
Having blinders on holds me back

Other emotions follow the path
Unknowingly bears a soul that is lost
Having blinders on holds me back
This pale imitation of a poet 


Placement in contest:  3rd

Featured Poem Of The Week Ending Oct 24th
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Brown Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 10:23 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Paula. Love, Carol
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October 18, 2010 at 10:21 PM
A definite favorite tonight, Paula! I missed this as I did many others at first posting..Beautiful...Congratulations on your poem being featured this week on PS. Love, Audrey
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October 17, 2010 at 1:00 PM
Congrats Paula on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all my friend this happy Sunday with luv.....
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October 14, 2010 at 4:40 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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September 24, 2010 at 12:30 AM
Paula, congrats on your fine placement in the contest very nice read.....enjoyed it Peace, Kurt
Guzzi Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 1:52 PM
nawww you are the real deal! a most excellent poet Congrad's! Light & Love
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September 22, 2010 at 1:10 PM
Congrats on your fine success in the contest. I love thisform.BG
Mehta Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 4:20 AM
Congratulations on this nice win in the contest, Paula
Brown Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 4:10 AM
Congratulations Paula on your win in John Heck's contest "Encore". Love, Carol
Mannan Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 2:11 AM
Many congrats on your win. The poem is really great. Loved the line,'Tears at.......through.
Sweetheart Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 7:24 PM
Congrats Paula on your winning poem in the Encore contest.. another rare beauty .. another beautiful win my friend.. enjoy tonight with luv..
Richards Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 5:38 PM
I love this gem, Paula....how we all sometimes feel, but when we discover the well of emotion, the words flow like water. Congratulations on your win in John's contest!!
Palli Avatar
March 13, 2010 at 12:28 PM
A very skillful write.
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