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This Old House

our old house shivers every time it pours it shakes like the common cold

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Date: 2/17/2022 5:05:00 PM
I love that line, "it shakes like the common cold". Nice close for this Haiku, Karen. Achoo! Excuse me. he hee, Bill
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Karen Croft
Date: 2/18/2022 12:36:00 AM
My old house was like this! My new house has it's faults, but their man made!! Hugs-Karen

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