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This Maze Called Life

As we stroll through this maze called life We'll pass by the hails of sorrow and strife The long and winding road that we pass by Will make our souls saddened and our hearts cry Tawny trails and rusty roads, we'll venture On this journey that we call adventure We'll walk by the paths, odd and uncertain With faith in our hearts as our own captain On yellow wood riddled with thorns and snares Menace will challenge the depth of our stares Across rogue rivers and misty mountains We'll dare the ensnares of looming fountains We'll ride against devil on way to salvation With gusts of wind ahead of our destination We'll challenge the blow of winter and fall Through this maze called life, as we stroll 1st place

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Date: 6/12/2023 12:05:00 PM
I replied to you below. it's not a huge concern, Roger.
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 6/12/2023 1:54:00 PM
Thank you very much... I just hope that our poems will not be deleted... If it violates a rule they just disqualify it...
Date: 6/12/2023 1:10:00 AM
Life is a maze full of labrynthine paths and rugged twists. But we tread them with hope. Our faith and hope provide us with the stamina to jump over the hurdles of life. Great poem, Roger!
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 6/12/2023 3:29:00 AM
Thank you very much...I'm afraid my maze is about to end...
Date: 6/11/2023 8:11:00 AM
Well done, Roger. Hey did you hear the new rule about putting dates and extra info under our poems? See the blogs about it. It's so weird.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/12/2023 12:04:00 PM
they said he rule was for all poems going forwsard. I just hope the current judges all realize what is going on in their current contest
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Valsa George
Date: 6/12/2023 1:13:00 AM
I too agree with you Andrea and the sentiments Roger has expressed. The new rule is so weird !
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 6/11/2023 11:31:00 AM
Thank you very much for reminding me... We put our minds and body in every poem we make and they'll just be deleted for failing to follow rules? I now have a problem of how can I pull out all my poems... I think I'm quitting PS... There's no point in joining contest then if you can't even remember when you made your entry and for what contest, more if it will just be deleted because you failed to follow rules, even by honest mistake... It's not that easy to make a poem and your mind at that point and time when you made it can't just be duplicated by rewriting your poem...
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 6/11/2023 11:11:00 AM
Thank you very much... Does that mean that my entry poem will be deleted if I put date and contest title? What's wrong with the old rule that we used?

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