This I Know

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I know a place I know a dream Dream of wonder Dream of love Love and joy Love that sparkles Sparkles like a diamond Sparkles like a star Star so bright Star in the sky Sky of charcoal Sky infinitely vast Vast expanse Vast array of comets Comets interstellar Comets so spectacular Spectacular views Spectacular beauty Beauty beyond compare Beauty of twilight Twilight phenomena Twilight wonderfully alive Alive and kicking Alive with wondrous chirps Chirps of crickets Chirps of birds Birds flightless and Birds that fly Fly such dizzying heights Fly so free Free as can be Free and unfettered Unfettered authority Unfettered freedom Freedom to soar and sing Freedom to migrate Migrate south in winter Migrate the world over Over the marshmallow clouds Over the seven seas Seas many have sailed and Seas uncharted Uncharted terrain Uncharted journey Journey into the night Journey into the unknown Unknown destination Unknown territory Territory Destination Date written: 06/23/2020

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/1/2020 10:37:00 PM

And now, when I do lay me down to sleep, here's what I'll picture. You have become my sleep therapist, par excellence, Edward. Many thanks, Gershon

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/2/2020 12:21:00 AM

I'm glad you like this one, Gershon:-) Have you ever thought of consulting a hypnotist to help you get better sleep? Food for thought, lol.

Julia A Keirns

Date: 6/26/2020 2:52:00 PM

Wow, I really like this one. Our destinations and journeys are almost always unknown no matter how much we plan them. Julie

Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/26/2020 4:32:00 PM

Thank you so much for visiting and commenting on my poem, Julia:-) Blessings. xoxo

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/24/2020 7:20:00 AM

So nice to be traversing to the unknown destination--lovely images, Edward.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/24/2020 2:07:00 PM

Thank you very much, Vijay:-) I'm glad you took the journey!