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This Here Is a Showdown

This here’s a showdown. It ain’t no hoedown. No prancing around here like some kind of clown. This is a test to see who is the best Who’s got the goods to take everyone down! Who in the end will wear the gold crown? I think I’m going to turn this around! Let’s just be rhymin’ with everyone chimin’ in with each other like sisters and brothers from all different mothers. With harmony smother each other…. Peace out! April 2, 2018 for Juli-Michelle's Rhyme Battle X: Showdown

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Date: 4/14/2018 8:46:00 AM
Well done Andrea, I like your version. It made me smile. Your rhythm and rhyme are great.
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Date: 4/8/2018 4:52:00 PM
Great rhythm Andy!
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Date: 4/8/2018 4:18:00 PM
sounds musical
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Date: 4/8/2018 4:17:00 PM
sounds musical
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Date: 4/7/2018 11:04:00 AM
Peace out sister! I smell a winner ;) xomo!
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/8/2018 6:09:00 AM
Well then, I present to you my own award: THE MO's CHOICE AWARD ...tadaaaah!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/7/2018 6:56:00 PM
No you don't,sweetie. I lost with that judge, just as I expected I would!!
Date: 4/6/2018 10:32:00 AM
You want to teach the world to sing? I'm in!
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Date: 4/5/2018 3:11:00 AM
Now that is a meaningful showdown. And I believe that poetry can heal the world, inch by inch. Many wishes, Kai
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Date: 4/3/2018 9:32:00 PM
Ain't no twister...like a sizzling sister...Andrea inda house!...^WW^
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Date: 4/3/2018 4:05:00 PM
Sounds like a poetry competition in full swing. Liked the last line a lot. I am going upstate later this month for a reading to celebrate National poetry month - which is in April. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 4/3/2018 1:13:00 PM
Omg! Omg! I am shocked at your rapping ability... I didnt know you could do gangsta! Lol.
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Date: 4/3/2018 11:30:00 AM
Andrea, Andrea the girl from Iowa throwing down a little hip-hop-rap...very impressive...with a nod to the 60's with peace out...love this...good luck dear rapper...
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Date: 4/3/2018 9:44:00 AM
Too darned cute! In my head your dressed for the part and delivering these lines from a stage with a sassy smile and challenging eyes. I have a healthy imagination! A joy, absolutely a joy. Love ... CayCay
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Date: 4/3/2018 1:57:00 AM
Excellent. Very fun to read with your words. Enjoyed. All the best for the contest. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 4/3/2018 1:47:00 AM
Hi Andrea, I like the message in this well written piece. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/2/2018 11:21:00 PM
No one could have said this with any less anonymity or love; well done my friend. Well done! Good luck!
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Date: 4/2/2018 9:57:00 PM
This world would be a better place if only... A fun read, Andrea:)
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Date: 4/2/2018 7:16:00 PM
This is 37. We both have same last two numbers.
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Date: 4/2/2018 5:10:00 PM
A whole lotta fun! GL in contest!
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Date: 4/2/2018 4:55:00 PM
Andrea, I could sense the up-temp rap-like rhythm of this poem. Wouldn't it be great it everyone could live in harmony? Enjoyed, my friend!
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Date: 4/2/2018 4:30:00 PM
A fun read..enjoyed reading the turn in your poem--always good to write in harmony as you say..best for a win, Andrea.
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Date: 4/2/2018 3:12:00 PM
Sounds like you're having fun...word dancing...with a little tickle of challenging...All the best Andrea
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