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This Heart of Mine

This old gypsy heart of mine roaming through the fields again lost in lone beats of the flamenco yearning for another song to send Gentle highs and woeful lows battles both large and small nesting as the trade winds blow aching again to hear your call This old gypsy heart of mine never known a place that's home traveling trails through darkest night where not even stars are shone But even if this heart is broke these pieces still crave to mend with a gentle touch within the night and soothing soul, to call a friend *You know when it's time to walk away*

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/7/2017 5:55:00 PM
:'(, one of the hardest things to do is to walk away.... good one Tim hugs
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Date: 12/7/2017 12:00:00 AM
The roving heart wow so poetically expressed in admirable wording. The last stanza was sweetly appealibg n dreamy. Kudos. So nice to read from your pen again. Pls do review my latest poem too.
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Date: 12/6/2017 3:29:00 PM
Very lovely poetry, Tim. Did the quote inspire this? Or is this quote what you came to after writing this gem?
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Date: 12/6/2017 2:43:00 PM
You make the loneliness bearable with shards of a silver lining visible between your lines Tim. Lovely! : )
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Date: 12/6/2017 12:41:00 PM
Most certainly true, when it's time to walk away. A tender heart! Sending you a warm hug my dear friend Tim... hugs and smile :)
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Date: 12/6/2017 11:27:00 AM
A beautifully written poem expressed with sadness. I like the repetition too with the words you chose. :)
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Date: 12/6/2017 11:11:00 AM
A delicate sadness, beautifully penned.
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