This Golden Day: a Madrigal For Amber

My Amber dear, awake to me. 
My madrigal has melody
in trills of the gold finch that you hear.
Awake to me, my Amber dear!

It’s dawn.  Arise, my angel sweet.
Put golden slippers on your feet.
We’ll follow where our songbird flies.
My angel sweet. It’s dawn; arise!

We must make haste, my lovely lass,
to walk on glistening velvet grass.
A day like this we cannot waste.
My lovely lass, we must make haste!

A meadow waits, my cherished one.
Through sun-bright posies we shall run,
where dewy fragrance permeates.
My cherished one, a meadow waits!

I know a stream, my darling love,
a shining mountain sits above.
And water falls where gold fish gleam.
My darling love, I know a stream.

We’ll find a rock, oh, maiden fair,
where you can loose your yellow hair.
And please me more. . . unloose your frock!
Oh, maiden fair, we’ll find a rock.

My one true heart, do come away.
Beneath the falls this golden day,
pure pleasure will our love impart.
Do come away, my one true heart!


4/17/14 for the Colourful Verse Contest of Charlotte Puddifoot

(Just playing around with swap quatrain form,
imagining one of those guys from centuries ago trying
to woo his maiden!)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Babcock Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 1:12 PM
liked what you have written in this quatrain. love phyl
A  Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 10:35 AM
Andrea, love the win....SKAT
Mehta Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 5:10 AM
Congrats on the win and thanks for sharing this colorful poem, Andrea
A   Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 1:40 AM
Hey Andrea, it's nice to almost have time here... LOL.. congrats in this contest.. Linda
A. Sharma Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 12:02 AM
Andrea wit wid colors that's u ! Great poem adorable! Congrats on great win !
Banner Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 9:21 PM
Good work....
Kos Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 7:15 PM
This is a truly admirable poem. I like the repeat alternations as well. I felicitate (congratulate) you on your win!
Nair Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 6:31 PM
Congrats, andrea, this is a lovely piece!
Gorelick Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 5:36 PM
YOur "fooling around" is pretty good.!Congrats. I really like this form...BG
Parker Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 5:15 PM
I would have placed this poem higher, congratulations on you win, maybe it's because I'm partial to rhymes and its skill when done right
Dietrich Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 9:13 PM
this was sweet of you to say. It's all in the eye of the beholder. You and I are sonneteers and that is what will always draw us in first! an excellent rhyme.
Guzzi Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 4:57 PM
Yup and I LOVE repetition in verse, I was glad to finally realize what Charlotte didn't like about my verse LOL, oh well you are #1 ;) congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Puddifoot Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 4:44 PM
andrea, this one posed a real problem for me! if I'm honest it's not my kind of poetry, and I think you'll know that, and the use of repetition pushed it further down the list (I was just saying to debbie the other day that repetitive forms irk me! lol) I know you won't take it personally from me, and you know that I know the extraordinary scope and technical skill of your work...I did love the vivid golds, ambers and yellows! and "unloose your frock"?!! haha naughty :) congrats on your win!
Carrillo Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 4:14 PM
Hi Andrea; Your playing around turned out real good. I liked it I also think it was beautiful back then. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
Horne Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 2:54 PM
love this, Andrea - I thought it would be about your former odd lodger, LOL (the cook!!)
Callus Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 4:00 AM
How romantic Andrea! Back to the times of knights and dames. Well-tackled form...flows...very musical, idyllic. Happy Easter. :) // paul
Callus Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 3:43 PM
congrats on win; merited better. :)
Anish Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 11:29 PM
Very colorful verse! Hope you win and thanks for the comment on my confessional piece! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Carroll Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 11:11 AM
A magical and creative write Andrea!
Austin Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 10:15 AM
Cyrano could have penned this one. Sure to win any maiden's heart. Love, daver
May Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 9:31 AM
A lovely madrigal Andrea..I love the form
Guzzi Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 8:56 AM
nice wooing Andie Light & Love
Sirak Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 5:45 AM
Your words are pure and golden no matter what form you write in.
Kendrick Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 5:12 AM
Imagination runs wild in this antique work..I really like this kind though..This is true poetry to me..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Thirtyseven Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 3:45 AM
Reads smoothly, like you've done this many a time. Thanks for the win in your competition, I have changed to "free verse"; just when I thought I was understanding the difference between 'free' and 'blank'. May Easter treat you well.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 18, 2014 at 10:46 PM
They would have been copying your words Andrea. This is lovely and so romantic!
Smith Avatar
April 18, 2014 at 6:55 PM
I love you swap Andrea...Ah the simple times..Your describe the wooing splendidly..Sometimes I wish times were still like this...hugs
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