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This Autumn Day

Amber is this Autumn day, Bedazzling me with beautiful brilliance. Crisp is the breeze and colorful are the trees. Dusk descends with its darkness. Eventide has extinguished the day’s enticement and emptiness engulfs me. Oct. 4, 2017

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John Watt

Date: 10/6/2020 6:43:00 PM

Beautiful imagery of autumn and so many well chosen words.

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/18/2017 9:43:00 PM

Charming poem, congrats on your win, Andrea.

John Fleming

Date: 11/3/2017 12:08:00 PM

You could not have chosen a better word than "amber" to describe the closing act of Autumn, Andrea. Lovely little poem! My very best regards as always. :) john

Francis J Grasso

Date: 10/24/2017 8:03:00 AM

"Amber is this Autumn day..." beautiful line! Congratulations on this Trophy win, Andrea. ...Fran

Debbie Duncan

Date: 10/21/2017 8:15:00 PM

Congrats on your win. :)

Andrew Battaglino

Date: 10/19/2017 10:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Beautiful flowing poem

Michael Tor

Date: 10/18/2017 11:02:00 PM

Congratulations Andrea on your first place finish. "This Autumn Day" you can celebrate this win. Lovely write Andrea...

John Hamilton

Date: 10/18/2017 9:35:00 PM

Congrats Andrea on a top win, enjoyed this poem especially the alliteration in the last line, off the charts good!

Bawa Talwar

Date: 10/18/2017 8:11:00 PM

Congratulations Andrea on your win ! Its well deserved.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 10/18/2017 2:18:00 PM

Congrats ... this is lovely, Andrea.

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/18/2017 12:59:00 PM

Congratulations Andrea on your top win with this beautifully written poem.

Harshita Chaudhary

Date: 10/18/2017 9:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Wish you success every time.

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/18/2017 8:31:00 AM

Awesome, Andrea! Congratulations on your well-deserved Trophy win! Hugs, Sandra

Gary Smith

Date: 10/18/2017 8:25:00 AM

A lovely poem Andrea, congrats

Agnes Krampe

Date: 10/12/2017 7:22:00 AM

Lovely, I especially love how you take the ABC to a new level with the alliterations!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/12/2017 6:46:00 AM

Andrea, Let me say that I am sorry that your poem did not go on the winners' list..I have no idea why I did not place it there..It is a good poem and should have been there..Only one thing that I see wrong but that is not why it did not get on the list and that is you left out the r in breeze..I think when I was checking and rechecking that I just plain failed to click on the yes button..I can't go in and correct it now..Sara

Pashang Salehi

Date: 10/8/2017 6:28:00 PM

Spring is gone, summer is past, Autumn is falling faster and fast.... Good luck my dear...

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/6/2017 8:34:00 AM

This is a perfect Autumn day, filled with breezes and brilliance with colors everywhere! Unfortunately extinguished by the evening, and how the evening brings you emptiness is sad! I enjoy how the darkness brings the extremities of light throughout the area! It lets the pieces of light that exists to shine brilliantly when darkness comes! I try to find the positive in every event, if not the night would permanently put me into such a depression I'd never get out of! Great Work my friend!!