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This a Place Called Beautiful

"This" a place called beautiful 

When the fire ball floats up in the morning
staring into your eyes 
with a dark orange glow.
The buildings and things reflects its tantalizing beauty.
Still! you stare as it quiets your attention.
God finds your heart gentle.
Only should you keep it that way all day
You!
Me!
They!
Yes Us all
It will be a place called beautiful.
© Al. Juman The "Said" Poet 6/18/2016


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Elaine George

Date: 8/26/2018 9:08:00 AM

Yes! The earth and all its splendor shared with someone you love. Nothing could be more beautiful. Thank you for bringing back such beautiful memories for me, Al. sincerely, Elaine .

Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 8/23/2018 1:33:00 AM

I really like this. Well done. Challenges the thoughts about dawning day.

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

Date: 8/2/2018 4:16:00 AM

beautiful. it is that simple, but maybe it took something complex to reach simple. maybe. maybe not.

Al Juman
Date: 8/21/2018 2:18:00 PM

Thanks my dear

FJ Thomas

Date: 7/10/2018 8:25:00 PM

Yes it would; very beautiful. A lovely write Al :)

Al Juman
Date: 7/10/2018 11:04:00 PM

appreciate that my dear --thank you

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/9/2018 10:29:00 PM

A gently soulful yet powerfully inspiring poem, Al. Beautifully expressed and a wonderful first poem at Soup. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Al Juman
Date: 7/9/2018 10:43:00 PM

thank you my dear appreciate that

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 7/9/2018 4:12:00 PM

It is a great poem with a eye catching topic, "it will be a placed called beautiful" this is a wonderful first post of yours here on poetrysoup

Al Juman
Date: 7/9/2018 10:38:00 PM

Thank you my friend

Debbie Duncan

Date: 7/2/2018 10:54:00 PM

Nicely done, I like reading the first poem. Thank you for coming to read my Injured Bird :)

Al Juman
Date: 7/3/2018 2:26:00 AM

appreciate that my dear

Paul Callus

Date: 6/16/2018 4:35:00 PM

I am pleasantly impressed by this your first post at Soup, Al. Lovely and uplifting. Regards // paul

Al Juman
Date: 6/21/2018 2:45:00 AM

Thanks a million my friend

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/13/2018 11:00:00 AM

Taking in your first post on soup, Al, such an inspiring piece,,love it...

Al Juman
Date: 6/19/2018 12:55:00 PM

Thanks you my friend

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/9/2018 12:18:00 PM

A very belated welcome to the soup. This was an excellent first piece.

Al Juman
Date: 6/19/2018 12:56:00 PM

Thanks Richard

Yuhi Musinga

Date: 4/9/2018 3:36:00 AM

Great poem

Al Juman
Date: 6/19/2018 12:57:00 PM

thanks Yuhi

Angelo Pierre Louis

Date: 7/9/2016 10:05:00 AM

Great poem. The title really caught my attention.

Al Juman
Date: 7/11/2016 2:17:00 AM

Thanks my friend much obliged

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/23/2016 9:20:00 PM

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Al Juman
Date: 6/28/2016 4:06:00 PM

Thanks-- you spent a lot of time writing. Thanks again Sorry I am not well but thanks