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This a Place Called Beautiful

"This" a place called beautiful 

When the fire ball floats up in the morning
staring into your eyes 
with a dark orange glow.
The buildings and things reflects its tantalizing beauty.
Still! you stare as it quiets your attention.
God finds your heart gentle.
Only should you keep it that way all day
You!
Me!
They!
Yes Us all
It will be a place called beautiful.
© Al. Juman The "Said" Poet 6/18/2016


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Elaine George

August 26, 2018 at 9:08 AM

Yes! The earth and all its splendor shared with someone you love. Nothing could be more beautiful. Thank you for bringing back such beautiful memories for me, Al. sincerely, Elaine .

Janis Medders Tobechi

August 23, 2018 at 1:33 AM

I really like this. Well done. Challenges the thoughts about dawning day.

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

August 2, 2018 at 4:16 AM

beautiful. it is that simple, but maybe it took something complex to reach simple. maybe. maybe not.

Al Juman

August 21, 2018 at 2:18 PM

Thanks my dear

FJ Thomas

July 10, 2018 at 8:25 PM

Yes it would; very beautiful. A lovely write Al :)

Al Juman

July 10, 2018 at 11:04 PM

appreciate that my dear --thank you

Susan Ashley

July 9, 2018 at 10:29 PM

A gently soulful yet powerfully inspiring poem, Al. Beautifully expressed and a wonderful first poem at Soup. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Al Juman

July 9, 2018 at 10:43 PM

thank you my dear appreciate that

Faraz Ajmal

July 9, 2018 at 4:12 PM

It is a great poem with a eye catching topic, "it will be a placed called beautiful" this is a wonderful first post of yours here on poetrysoup

Al Juman

July 9, 2018 at 10:38 PM

Thank you my friend

Debbie Duncan

July 2, 2018 at 10:54 PM

Nicely done, I like reading the first poem. Thank you for coming to read my Injured Bird :)

Al Juman

July 3, 2018 at 2:26 AM

appreciate that my dear

Paul Callus

June 16, 2018 at 4:35 PM

I am pleasantly impressed by this your first post at Soup, Al. Lovely and uplifting. Regards // paul

Al Juman

June 21, 2018 at 2:45 AM

Thanks a million my friend

Harry Horsman

June 13, 2018 at 11:00 AM

Taking in your first post on soup, Al, such an inspiring piece,,love it...

Al Juman

June 19, 2018 at 12:55 PM

Thanks you my friend

Richard Lamoureux

June 9, 2018 at 12:18 PM

A very belated welcome to the soup. This was an excellent first piece.

Al Juman

June 19, 2018 at 12:56 PM

Thanks Richard

Yuhi Musinga

April 9, 2018 at 3:36 AM

Great poem

Al Juman

June 19, 2018 at 12:57 PM

thanks Yuhi

Angelo Pierre Louis

July 9, 2016 at 10:05 AM

Great poem. The title really caught my attention.

Al Juman

July 11, 2016 at 2:17 AM

Thanks my friend much obliged

Poet Destroyer A

June 23, 2016 at 9:20 PM

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Al Juman

June 28, 2016 at 4:06 PM

Thanks-- you spent a lot of time writing. Thanks again Sorry I am not well but thanks