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This Crazy Heart of Mine

My heart a sky of sunny spells Of passing clouds and falling tears Sometimes it shines Sometimes it rains on our dried river and fading flames. Sometimes its still as a night could be At times it feels what it can't see ...and then it beats its rapid beat Inhaling yesterdays Breathing the breeze Sometimes an ocean in tides of blue where silver linings of hope flow through ...And the beginning and end is you. My heart a sky in shades of black a married widow mourning life's death Other times restless Mistress in bed A pure desire of a newly wed. My heart ...This heart... This crazy heart At times so strong as old oak trees At times so weak Down on its knees Farther than distance Slower than time Deeper than absence this heart of mine. Sometimes like cinnamon scenting so sweet Other times sour like rising yeast. My heart...a sky of crimson spells where all suns set in empty wells My heart a sky where moons will hide yet their last whispers your eyes will find It seeks to reach all lonely hearts and bliss them with soft blinking stars. My heart This heart This crazy heart which keeps on drumming its songs in rhyme No matter how I try to silence it It keeps on echoing a love sublime. My heart This heart This heart of mine It keeps on going to moments far It keeps on showing me different faces till I am back right where you are. My heart This heart This crazy heart keeps acting faster than my own mind. It is a clown playing all games on me This crazy heart This heart of mine.

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The Situation

Date: 9/13/2023 2:21:00 PM

it has a message and a flow. Now I try to consider what makes a woman choose. And looking at this her choices. Always ending with perfection.

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 8/17/2018 7:49:00 AM

I Like this a lot , the flow-- the message ---and of course the rhyming

Lyric Man

Date: 5/13/2018 10:06:00 PM

Perfection beginning to end!

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 4/9/2018 10:59:00 AM

A mighty poem and a mighty heart. Kind wishes, Kai

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/11/2017 6:29:00 PM

Reminds me of a line from a Greatful Dead song - "the heart has its reasons - its seasons and songs of its own ". Peace & Love Matthew Ansih

Debbie Duncan

Date: 6/15/2017 11:05:00 PM

Congrats on your placement :)

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 6/12/2017 10:38:00 AM

Beautiful and wondrous, dreamy and extends its love to the reader, one of your finest Charmaine, and a fave:-)

Stellamoses Hart

Date: 6/3/2017 6:07:00 AM

I haven't really enjoyed reading something in a while like I did while reading this. Truly beautiful. Congrats and keep writing.

Gachoka Rashid

Date: 6/1/2017 11:44:00 PM

this is very lovely congratulations, or should i say its heart melting.

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 6/1/2017 9:41:00 PM

Congratulations on getting the POTD for this wonderful write Charmaine :) Amitiés

Lenna Walker

Date: 6/1/2017 7:00:00 PM

Wonderful Charmaine, congrats on POTD !! :)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 6/1/2017 5:04:00 PM

Hi Charmaine, your heart is ever singing and it sings forever in the beautiful poetry that you write. Indeed, you are a shining star in this poetic soup, your words always shining brightly. This poetic gem is truly worthy of Poem Of The Day. Congratulations on the accolade. A beautiful and sincere heart shall go on forever, if this is the case you shall go on and on. This gem has to be a fave. Hugs....Mike. XX

Jan Allison

Date: 6/1/2017 4:49:00 PM

this heart of mine is heavy Charma but I am delighted for you that your final poem here is awarded with POTD:-( HUGE HUGS :-) jan xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/1/2017 2:23:00 PM

- Beautifully described emotions, Charmaine :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Shreastha Vyas

Date: 6/1/2017 1:17:00 PM

Nice poem

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/1/2017 12:32:00 PM

Hi again dear Charma :)! This is such a wowser and heartfelt poem, filled with so many emotions, that it seemed to spill over each line for me. I can imagine you reading this with your amazing voice & accent. Crazy heart, you say? But a very beautiful and loving heart it is <3. Sending you hugs <3

Gary Bateman

Date: 6/1/2017 11:55:00 AM

Charma, Congratulations on POTD. The heart is the center our emotions and life's nuances which make up our daily interactions and thoughts. Very Well-Done!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Chris Green

Date: 6/1/2017 11:36:00 AM

Hey there, congrats of POTD. This one is a beautiful choice, I am so thrilled it was chosen. My hat is off to you my sweet friend.

Joseph May

Date: 6/1/2017 11:31:00 AM

Dropping back with my Congrats on POTD

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/1/2017 10:02:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD Charmaine. Nicely penned! ...and what a beautiful heart it is:)

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 6/1/2017 10:35:00 AM

Thanks so much :)

Eve Roper

Date: 6/1/2017 9:43:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD... nicely done. ~*

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 6/1/2017 10:35:00 AM

Thanks so much dear.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 6/1/2017 9:27:00 AM

Everything of yours that I read is right up there with the old classical poets, and this is no exception. Congratulations!

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 6/1/2017 11:02:00 AM

Aw thanks so much Sunlite.I am really an amateur..thankyou.

Charlie Smith

Date: 6/1/2017 8:32:00 AM

Lovely work Charmaine, congratulations on POTD honors...

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 6/1/2017 11:02:00 AM

Thanks so much Charlie

Dean Wood

Date: 6/1/2017 8:09:00 AM

Really beautiful Charmaine! so many great lines in this one, "At times it feels what it can't see", and "Farther than distance Slower than time Deeper than absence this heart of mine." That last one is a poem within a poem. Wonderful! - Dean

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 6/1/2017 11:04:00 AM

Glad you like my little write,many thanksDean.

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/1/2017 7:31:00 AM

Hi Charma, It's no surprise that you received such an honor. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 6/1/2017 11:05:00 AM

Aw thanks sweet lady