This -Thing-

This “thing” wears many unlicensed costumes:  

         Life force,  Vital breath,  Cosmic energy
         Spirit, soul, original source, qualia, awareness
         Consciousness, divine, angel, light
         Air, Qi, Taoism……

Can you see Qi?  Absolutely, 
         A speechless rainbow after storm stretching across the sky
         Radiant heat from hot coffee in a chilly morning
         Aurora Northern lights dancing to Viennese waltz
Can you hear Qi?  Absolutely, 
         Mozart piano sonata #16;  Father involuntary snoring 
         Melodic bubbling of a lively creek 
Can you taste Qi?   Absolutely, 
         Kissing your beloved goodnight; Grandma’s soft buttery rolls
         Giggling children whispering in each other’s ears
Can you smell Qi?  Absolutely, 
         Purple delphiniums blooming like royalty
         Warm salty sea breeze
Can you touch Qi?  Absolutely,  
         Mysterious fog and clouds; Morning dew on Spring leaves
         Lonely hope and fear of cancer survivors

This “thing” Qi enters the mechanisms of a living system 
without ringing a doorbell.
We called it * miracle of newborn’s first breath!!!   

This “thing” Qi ceases the organic processes of a particular body 
without consent.
We named it * death!!  

Another newborn arrives
         experiencing love and hatred, cope with pandemic, 6' social distance
         mortgages, menopause, dementia
Heartbeat stops.
Mary-Go-Around or Spiritual Reset…..you decide.

No one claims the ownership to This “thing”  Qi
			Submit your Patent and Trademark application, 
                        God will stamp DENIED

This “thing”  a visitor without passport.
…….Just passing through, indeed, just passing through …….

Passing through Quantum mechanics 
         particles sometimes pass through impenetrable barrier
         Breaking the speed of light
Quantum tunneling:  This “thing” 
         Qi tunnels through mountain barrier like it wasn’t there.

This “thing” Qi initiates us
         We are temporary This “thing”.

Very curious - What is the source of This “thing” ? 
         Mildly at first, then morbidly so.
Is This “thing” Qi the giant clouds of primordial elements from Big Bang? Absolutely  
How long This “thing” been traveling?
         Traveling through emptiness

Traveling through fraction of thoughts…… my thoughts…..your thoughts

          Traveling through silence of gravity

Unsolved Mystery
This “thing” Qi knows when to get off the train.  Enjoy the ride.
          It’s Just passing through

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 12/3/2021 5:11:00 PM
Brilliant writing, Sierra!
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Date: 12/1/2021 2:12:00 AM
This is indeed a poetic key to Qi. A key, and indeed a Qi, to some great reading here.
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Date: 11/30/2021 5:19:00 PM
I wish to compliment you on your poetry which I find brilliant with a graciousness of language, word and heart - most touching and very enjoyable to read.I have read many and compliment you on all. Thank you for writing!
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Date: 11/30/2021 2:46:00 PM
Brilliant! Original thinking at its best. Thank you for sharing with the world.
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Date: 11/11/2020 3:05:00 AM
Deep poetry here, and one that has a personal touch to it...
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