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Thinking of You

THINKING OF YOU

I saw you before walking slow in the aisle
clothed in peach and wearing a godlike smile
Your grace like the empress of Greece and Nile
Spelled by heaven to color this world drown in vile
Thousand facets that rose to curl along the coldest mile
is now the Belle that sobered this wordless guile
Love swarms, love warmth roll in the aisle of wile

I, a being thirsty to drink from your lips
because sanity cascades in honest  weep,
heart and soul have fallen fast and deep.
Good to cry, so I try yet still, sometime it creeps
All I can do is to blow dreams of you as I sleep
hoping in yonder you would stare though quite steep
then lend me please to savor your Aphrodite kiss

Could my love be as real as your unsober grace?
And if eyes and hearts desire such tempting face
More so a name ruling the entire human race...
God helps this dreamer, to the heaven I kneel and gaze
I, a man who yearns nothing but heaven's ways
Pardon me if these words draws like a maze
yet, let me deliver for my heart is chaste

Evening skirt and so I dream caressing your skin
Mercy oh mercy, I do not want to fall into sin
yet, I long to embrace you tight in more than dreams
Set free those lips of butter and cream
then allow me to show some places unseen
into a garden of bliss tinge not of mind green...
Let the brown horse through, the waters and swim

Now, I ran out of words for the wind dashing sways
behind may I say you could leave a man in thousand fray
A chance I dare ask for us so not to be dismayed
more time with you my ever longing say.
God makes the way when it seems there's no way
and if Cupid's arrow again miss the right pair
may tomorrow bring me more courage than today...
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O.E. Guillermo
1:53 pm; February 20, 2015

Sponsor: Gautami Phookan
Contest Name: I THINK OF YOU 
Placed 3rd

Copyright © Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser | Year Posted 2015

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/5/2015 10:06:00 PM Olive, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA Login to Reply

Anthony Ngabwe Date: 3/25/2015 1:02:00 AM Great poem, Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/26/2015 6:20:00 AM Thank you Anthony.. :)!

David Furlong Date: 2/28/2015 1:33:00 AM A lovely poem Olive, great feeling and expression. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/3/2015 1:56:00 AM thanks much David.. :)! I so appreciate you dropping by.. :)!

Jan Allison Date: 2/22/2015 6:52:00 PM A stunning write Olive - many congrats on your win. I believe cupid's arrow will strike at your heart my friend - forget what has happened in the past and look to the future:-) Hugs Jan xxx 7 xxx Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 2/25/2015 8:51:00 PM YEs, need to forgive and forget.. :) Yes I know God will write my love story soon.. :)! weeee! HE started the prelude already! :D ooooopS!

Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/22/2015 5:58:00 PM Olive, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~ Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 2/25/2015 8:50:00 PM thanks much Lolly Linda.. :)! weee! hugs!

Sandra Haight Date: 2/22/2015 3:24:00 PM Such a beautiful poem, Olive. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 2/24/2015 8:19:00 PM thanks much Sandra. :)! hugs too.. Your poems is beautiful too. :)!

Skat A Date: 2/22/2015 2:55:00 PM Olive, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win, enjoy the coming week **SKAT** Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 2/24/2015 8:18:00 PM thanks much Skat.. :) hugs.!

Gautami Phookan Date: 2/22/2015 5:05:00 AM Many Congrats Olive on your win with this beautiful, flowing write! I truly admired those expressions, I have to thank you for this poem! love, gautami Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 2/22/2015 6:24:00 AM thanks much GAutami.. :) I haven't sen yet the placement but thanks for appreciating my poem. :)! God bless us all..

Paul Callus Date: 2/20/2015 1:16:00 PM Hi Olive_eloi :) I believe that one of these days Cupid's arrow will hit with perfect aim. Do not dwell on the past; learn from the experience, but look ahead with trust. So lovely to have you back! hugs // paul Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 2/22/2015 6:17:00 AM I can only pray and hope Paul...:) Well, anyhow it will be just I know I will make it a point in my life to share love... :) big hugs tooo.. :)! thanks much!

James Fraser Date: 2/20/2015 4:32:00 AM Stunning romantic poem oozing love and more. Cupid and Father God have a beautiful task ahead of them, and a task that's joyous as your poem Olive. Beautiful reading this morning, James :) Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 2/20/2015 7:35:00 AM Thank you James.. :) Just yesterday thoughts been running to my mind and so I sat and write it down.. :) sometimes they come raining in sometimes no.. and Yes I believe FAther God blesses every pure intentions of the heart and even more when He sees that such will turn out to be good.. HE will bless.. :)! thanks much. :)

Njeri Hunjeri Date: 2/20/2015 12:49:00 AM Wow Olive, your lines breathes romance. What a romantic soul you are. Am anjoying your writings. Def a 7. My fav line "And if cupid's arrow again miss the right pair, may tomorrow bring more courage than today" Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 2/20/2015 7:31:00 AM thanks so much njeri.. :) I so appreciate you stopping by.. :) Maybe am just so affected of so many things and that been lots of time I have experienced love but at the end it all failed.. but thank God still until this day am hopeful that someday God will write my love story as well. :) thanks!