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THINKING OF YOU I saw you before walking slow in the aisle clothed in peach and wearing a godlike smile Your grace like the empress of Greece and Nile Spelled by heaven to color this world drown in vile Thousand facets that rose to curl along the coldest mile is now the Belle that sobered this wordless guile Love swarms, love warmth roll in the aisle of wile I, a being thirsty to drink from your lips because sanity cascades in honest weep, heart and soul have fallen fast and deep. Good to cry, so I try yet still, sometime it creeps All I can do is to blow dreams of you as I sleep hoping in yonder you would stare though quite steep then lend me please to savor your Aphrodite kiss Could my love be as real as your unsober grace? And if eyes and hearts desire such tempting face More so a name ruling the entire human race... God helps this dreamer, to the heaven I kneel and gaze I, a man who yearns nothing but heaven's ways Pardon me if these words draws like a maze yet, let me deliver for my heart is chaste Evening skirt and so I dream caressing your skin Mercy oh mercy, I do not want to fall into sin yet, I long to embrace you tight in more than dreams Set free those lips of butter and cream then allow me to show some places unseen into a garden of bliss tinge not of mind green... Let the brown horse through, the waters and swim Now, I ran out of words for the wind dashing sways behind may I say you could leave a man in thousand fray A chance I dare ask for us so not to be dismayed more time with you my ever longing say. God makes the way when it seems there's no way and if Cupid's arrow again miss the right pair may tomorrow bring me more courage than today... _________________________________________________ O.E. Guillermo 1:53 pm; February 20, 2015 Sponsor: Gautami Phookan Contest Name: I THINK OF YOU Placed 3rd

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/5/2015 10:06:00 PM

Olive, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA

Anthony Ngabwe

Date: 3/25/2015 1:02:00 AM

Great poem,

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/26/2015 6:20:00 AM

Thank you Anthony.. :)!

David Furlong

Date: 2/28/2015 1:33:00 AM

A lovely poem Olive, great feeling and expression.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/3/2015 1:56:00 AM

thanks much David.. :)! I so appreciate you dropping by.. :)!

Jan Allison

Date: 2/22/2015 6:52:00 PM

A stunning write Olive - many congrats on your win. I believe cupid's arrow will strike at your heart my friend - forget what has happened in the past and look to the future:-) Hugs Jan xxx 7 xxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/25/2015 8:51:00 PM

YEs, need to forgive and forget.. :) Yes I know God will write my love story soon.. :)! weeee! HE started the prelude already! :D ooooopS!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/22/2015 5:58:00 PM

Olive, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/25/2015 8:50:00 PM

thanks much Lolly Linda.. :)! weee! hugs!

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/22/2015 3:24:00 PM

Such a beautiful poem, Olive. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/24/2015 8:19:00 PM

thanks much Sandra. :)! hugs too.. Your poems is beautiful too. :)!

Skat A

Date: 2/22/2015 2:55:00 PM

Olive, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win, enjoy the coming week **SKAT**

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/24/2015 8:18:00 PM

thanks much Skat.. :) hugs.!

Gautami Phookan

Date: 2/22/2015 5:05:00 AM

Many Congrats Olive on your win with this beautiful, flowing write! I truly admired those expressions, I have to thank you for this poem! love, gautami

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/22/2015 6:24:00 AM

thanks much GAutami.. :) I haven't sen yet the placement but thanks for appreciating my poem. :)! God bless us all..

Paul Callus

Date: 2/20/2015 1:16:00 PM

Hi Olive_eloi :) I believe that one of these days Cupid's arrow will hit with perfect aim. Do not dwell on the past; learn from the experience, but look ahead with trust. So lovely to have you back! hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/22/2015 6:17:00 AM

I can only pray and hope Paul...:) Well, anyhow it will be just I know I will make it a point in my life to share love... :) big hugs tooo.. :)! thanks much!

James Fraser

Date: 2/20/2015 4:32:00 AM

Stunning romantic poem oozing love and more. Cupid and Father God have a beautiful task ahead of them, and a task that's joyous as your poem Olive. Beautiful reading this morning, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/20/2015 7:35:00 AM

Thank you James.. :) Just yesterday thoughts been running to my mind and so I sat and write it down.. :) sometimes they come raining in sometimes no.. and Yes I believe FAther God blesses every pure intentions of the heart and even more when He sees that such will turn out to be good.. HE will bless.. :)! thanks much. :)

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 2/20/2015 12:49:00 AM

Wow Olive, your lines breathes romance. What a romantic soul you are. Am anjoying your writings. Def a 7. My fav line "And if cupid's arrow again miss the right pair, may tomorrow bring more courage than today"

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/20/2015 7:31:00 AM

thanks so much njeri.. :) I so appreciate you stopping by.. :) Maybe am just so affected of so many things and that been lots of time I have experienced love but at the end it all failed.. but thank God still until this day am hopeful that someday God will write my love story as well. :) thanks!