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Thinking Inside the Box

If Everything with a face Had a soul Imagine That squished ballerina Peeking through the key hole 01/17/19 John Lawless' Slap The Muse And Turn It Loose Poetry Contest

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 2/1/2019 12:05:00 PM

Most Appropriate as Light Verse.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/1/2019 1:12:00 PM

Thank you Anisha! :) xomo

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/26/2019 9:26:00 PM

Biggest IF I've come across in a long, long time. Light verse --- with much room to roam and food for contem-PLATE-ion. Nicely done, maestra! :) gw

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/27/2019 9:20:00 AM

Thank you Wolf Man! I think Pandora would be proud of me for this one ;) xomo <3

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 1/26/2019 3:51:00 PM

Makes me think of a music box I had as a child with the ballerina on top, this is so original!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/26/2019 4:01:00 PM

You got it! ;) xomo!

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 1/20/2019 9:29:00 PM

lovely piece of verse

P.S. Awtry

Date: 1/19/2019 3:25:00 PM

YOU ARE SO FREAKIN' CLEVER! Wow! VERY VERY COOL! I know her ;)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/19/2019 10:52:00 PM

Thank you P.S.!!! I figured this one would be hit or miss, yay a hit! ;))) xomo

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/18/2019 9:52:00 AM

Poetry through... a key hole contest you said? Bull's Eye dearest Maureen! Hugs xxx

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/18/2019 11:33:00 AM

It tis for the key hole contest ;) Thank you sweet D xomo!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/17/2019 11:27:00 PM

You amaze me with creativity.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/18/2019 8:06:00 AM

Ah thank you Arthur! Which reminds me, I have to put pen to paper, I do have an idea for you...

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 1/17/2019 11:15:00 PM

Nice one, Maureen, clever imagery.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/18/2019 8:10:00 AM

Thank you Lawrence, a method poet, I'm still squished. ;)