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Think Outside the Box

“Think outside the box!!” Damn, as I age it’s become……. “Stay out of the box.” It’s mind over matter. If you don’t mind…… it don’t matter. Fine wine mellows Good cheese ages……. We …. get old. Before you do something stupid check the birth date… on your drivers license. Don’t have a drivers license then you’re too young or too old……………….. to do something that stupid. If your phone rings…. Damn you really are old. When the sales clerk asks “Do you have any questions?” you ask… “What’s the capitol of South Dakota” you are old….. and still a smart ass. Any request that requires moving from your favorite chair…… elicits a “Why”. If your version of the “good old days” includes walking to school, carrying a lunch, going out to play, heating water for a bath, galoshes, or Christmas………….. GET IN THE BOX….. John G. Lawless 11/2/2015

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Date: 11/6/2015 8:02:00 PM
Wonderful, You do have a knock for writing keep it up. ----Please do check out mines and tell me what you think
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Date: 11/3/2015 12:09:00 PM
You are a clever one! :) I LOVE LOVE LOVE this! Thanks for your praise on my sonnet. This is a very lovely write...I enjoy your sharp wit. :) Blessings.
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Date: 11/2/2015 3:53:00 PM
hahaha. this was really COOL (I am still in the box saying THAT expression). Great fun!
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John Lawless
Date: 11/3/2015 7:17:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, glad you got a chuckle reading it. When I worked at the high school I suggested to the students that the "blow up the box factory" and think for themselves.....the teachers would smile and say "That's why we love you Mr. L."
Date: 11/2/2015 11:46:00 AM
I love the way you subtly, and sometimes not quite so, make the insinuations you've written here. It's true that age is just a number and the older we get the less we seem to care what others think. I don't remember walking to school and some of the others you mentioned, but I LOVE your reference to phones no longer ringing, and if this poem is your idea of being a smart ass, I'm all for being that kind of ass.
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/3/2015 7:20:00 AM
And well you should.. that's QUITE a compliment!
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John Lawless
Date: 11/3/2015 7:15:00 AM
Thanks Lin my older(early 20's) grandchildren have been telling me for years that "I'm not like other grandfathers"....I take it as a compliment.

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