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things and stuff

While we’re renaming things,
can we please rename “United States” to “AAAmerica.”
I know I’m tired of scrolling to the bottom of every pop-down country list.
And ARE we united? Really, even a little?

That awkward moment when you’re already said, “what?” three times,
and you still have no idea what the conversation is about, but you can tell,
by bouncy and eager expressions, that the topic is loaded. Never sit at the end of a table, dining halls get noisy.

Has a song ever been your safe place?
What if it keeps you warm in a storm,
by getting you up and movin’?

Oh, what about the inimitable effect of a handsome guy?
Now, I don’t engage in decorous affections,
but ‘Cute Soccer Guy’ (I’ve mentioned him before),
wakes us up, by just showing up, oh, we play it lose,
and all, but he makes all of our hearts beat a little faster.
<-- check him out ?? (for a limited time)

P.S. Don’t you love the AI tool that lets us scrub others out of our pix?
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A song for this:
Twiggy Twiggy by [re:jazz]
The Trouble With Boys by Little Eva
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Theraven Avatar
January 22, 2025 at 11:17 PM
Anais, Liked "Has a song ever been your safe place? // What if it keeps you warm in a storm," Reminded me of Ready Player One (2018). -Richard
Theraven Avatar
January 23, 2025 at 6:11 PM
RPO quote: "One person can keep a secret, but not two." -R
Vionet Avatar
January 23, 2025 at 12:38 PM
I've never seen that - I'll have to try it ??
Conn Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 11:52 AM
This is no ordinary love, is it?
Conn Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 1:51 PM
Did you have Cocoa Puffs for breakfast today?
Vionet Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 12:52 PM
Nooooooooo, he’s just s cute guy we hang out with. Criminally cute. =]
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