Mark Paul Van Der Merwe Poet Free verse

Thieves Wishing Well Warning

Beware of wishing for money here,
the last person that tried and leaned in
to make change and also a wish,
fell to his death to the bottom 
and now all his wishes have come true.

10/14/2016
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Paul Callus October 19, 2016 at 3:55 PM That's what happens when greed intervenes! Unfortunately the money would only have amounted to loose change...not enough to cover the trip to pastures new:) Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich October 17, 2016 at 6:18 PM yikes, and he must have had a death wish too. I enjoyed this one, Mark!

Jan Allison October 16, 2016 at 11:45 PM Bet he wished he hadn't bothered Mark!:-) hugs Jan xx