Silent One Poet Sonnet

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The song selection was a choice between Iris and in the arms of an angel, from the movie, City of Angels.  I chose Iris.  This is not a romantic sonnet, but I like the lyrics in the song.

Dedicated to all those who go out of their way to make others smile and light up their lives, without wanting anything in return.  They walk amongst us..

This sonnet is not Iambic pentameter, but I did stick to 10 syllables per line.

 

They Walk Amongst Us

They walk amongst us, but in silent ways,
spreading peace and love without any praise.
When thunder roars and lightning strikes in rain
they watch over us, healing bleeding pain.

Yet we do not see their celestial light,
nor do they shed feathers within our sight.
Happy to hide behind unknown faces,
empathy guides them to deprived places.

Heal and soothe, they prevent tears from flowing,
touch our hearts to leave our spirits glowing.
From Sydney to London, Rome to Bombay,
provide moments that take our breath away

Their acts of grace form a ripple effect,
kind gestures that help people to connect.

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Lisa Busha June 28, 2024 at 8:19 AM Many angels walk amongst us. I have seen a few. A very excellent write.

David Crandall April 24, 2024 at 8:38 PM A nice recognition of those angels around us, that, without them, we probably would not be where we are today.

Benjamin Rosser December 25, 2023 at 8:29 AM Nice. About "angels", or compassionate people, among us I presume.

Kim Rodrigues November 21, 2023 at 3:08 PM Congratulations, Silent!

Sotto Poet November 21, 2023 at 1:22 PM Your prowess as a master of sonnets is demonstrated by this exquisite poem Silent One. Your work is truly exceptional. I extend my sincere congratulations on your well-deserved win in the contest.

Joseph May November 21, 2023 at 1:05 PM WE may have met angels and didn't know, Ver nicely Silent, Congrats on your win

Mahtab Bangalee March 31, 2021 at 3:53 AM stupendous writings

Jude Herrick November 2, 2020 at 3:47 AM Mentor Silent One November 2, 2020 at 6:50 AM Indeed...

Tansy Roekaerts September 25, 2020 at 10:56 AM i cant get th. is poem out of my head ive already commented on it I think. it sticks with me for some reason Silent One November 2, 2020 at 6:51 AM Because, only a few walk among you.... If you ever find one, keep them close... they are special.

James Inman September 1, 2020 at 2:51 PM A tender and kind write SO.

Aniruddha Pathak August 15, 2020 at 11:09 PM Lovely theme, beautifully handled

Diana77 Wh November 19, 2019 at 5:43 PM I had to check this out after your comment on my poem. I really like this. Thanks for sharing it.

Valerie Staton October 18, 2019 at 5:56 AM You are definitely right in stating angels walk amongst us. Celestial and in human form. Thank you for writing this beautiful poem!

Joseph P. DiMino April 20, 2019 at 11:43 PM Beautiful read, Si; I like to think there is a little angel in all of us, we just need the right inspiration to shine. Great write!

Jennifer Proxenos March 15, 2019 at 1:03 AM A wonderful poem to share with us all. There are givers and there are takers, but I would like to think that the givers outnumber the takers! A smile and a greeting is all one needs, a giver, who expects nothing in return - but a smile would be nice! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Valerie Staton January 1, 2019 at 8:12 AM Beautiful...

Vera Duggan December 26, 2018 at 6:24 PM Silent thank you so much for this dedication, this made me smile and lit up my life, it is such a beautiful sonnet, thank you for sharing and take care......Vera

Frances Schiavina December 26, 2018 at 9:33 AM Why didn't I think of that? Awesome!

Jan Terry November 30, 2018 at 5:06 PM Hello, Silent One. Checking in to see what I've been missing. You never disappoint me. You are one of the poets who motivate me to write. I don't post most of my poems but I am still writing and learning from poets like you. I love this sonnet especially because I love the music and vocals from 'City of Angels'. It just fits perfectly and is very moving. Best wishes for the holidays.

Bobby May November 27, 2018 at 8:30 AM You are an amazing poet!

Phyllis Babcock November 26, 2018 at 10:22 AM Just awesome. love phyl

Robert Lindley November 18, 2018 at 9:26 AM Exquisite proof that you are a sonnet master my friend. Every verse was like a slice of mom's homemade apple pie to me. Light, Truth and Poetry- so delicious and so brilliantly conceived.. A fav.. a true and brightly shining gem...

Vladislav Raven November 18, 2018 at 8:54 AM Hi Silent, This is such a beautiful write my friend. There are such people who always seem to come into your life when you are at your lowest, to lift you up so you can still travel life's track. This is such a gentle poem that sings the glory of such people. As always, you manage to say so much in your poetic flow. An excellent piece my friend. Belated congratulations on your Poem Of The Day. Much deserved. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike.

Caren Krutsinger November 17, 2018 at 9:02 AM The empathy and love in this poem shines through so sweetly, but silently. Beautiful, Missive,Silent One. I loved this part: "Heal and soothe, they prevent tears from flowing, touch our hearts to leave our spirits glowing." Congratulations on POTD. I just found this today, this morning or I would have written sooner.

Lyric Man November 16, 2018 at 5:27 AM SO.. you yourself are one of those! I salute your write, but I salute you as well!!

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