Get Your Premium Membership

They Say Good Love Is Hot - But Ours Is Cold : Letter 1 Series

Like a heart needs a vein I'm the frost on your windowpane No one knows me Like you do Every flaw Every fluke Just want to let you know I love you And that those words Are really true Everytime I look into your eyes My heart skips a beat And my breath dies Away with your words Buried in your voice To be with you I have no choice My flesh desires your touch My heart craves your love Sometimes I love you too much But its for my own good I'll never find someone like you again To heal my hurt And all my pain You are my sun In the rain And when I'm crazy You're my sane And when you're wrong I'm you're right And when you're not strong I'll continue to fight For you until Your last day Cause I'm the frost On your windowpane

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/28/2011 3:40:00 PM
Great poem about your love. Love your repeating thought on frost on the windowpane! LUv, andrea
Login to Reply
Date: 1/28/2011 2:55:00 PM
Strong words and a commiment to love no mater what... I like your words and heart in this one....Michael
Login to Reply
Date: 1/28/2011 2:54:00 PM
Nice wording and rhyming, but it makes me feel colder just reading it.
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things