They Emptied Out My Brain

In science lab one day
  they emptied out my brain
Even poked, it wouldn't say
  a word about my pain

at never chancing what I knew
  was beyond my comfort zone
That's why my brain just never grew 
  ~ the reason for my brittle bones

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Date: 11/24/2021 8:05:00 PM
Still there seems to be so much left in your brain... ! That's why you are able to entertain us much and make us think more ! Cheer up !
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Date: 11/24/2021 12:34:00 PM
Does our brain ever grow to full capacity, no lab knows how to do it, how to go back, and fill in the gaps. hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 11/24/2021 10:19:00 AM
Especially appropriate, Gershon, and sometimes exactly how I feel. Lying in a beach chaise, relaxing, then realized it was the worst seating for my lower back. Sometimes I'm absolutely convinced my "brain just never grew!"
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Date: 11/24/2021 7:16:00 AM
Love your wit, Gershon. Always enjoy your poem regardless of the form. Happy Thanksgiving. Bill
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Date: 11/24/2021 6:45:00 AM
Yikes, I hope its a fictional write. Tom
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Date: 11/24/2021 3:41:00 AM
Whoa!! A science lab probed your brain. I know they found high intelligence in there so they wanted to study you more. Your visits to my page are entertaining. Sara
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Date: 11/24/2021 1:08:00 AM
Always love the way you mingled the concrete and the prevailing. Even sometimes I feel so, may be my perception, as comfort zone has its own say.... Silpika
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Date: 11/24/2021 9:10:00 PM
Silpika, thank you. Your comments are a true joy to read and reflect upon. Many blessings, Gershon
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