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These Woods Along the Shore

I was forsaken by the one I love the most, as I walk into the woods like a lonely ghost. Fear cripples my spine and I am left afraid, damage from the farewell we portrayed. Oh- I wish, my beloved, you would’ve stayed. So, I tarry and carry this boulder on my shoulder. Do you think of me…”I just wanna hold her”.... Am I wondering these river shores just to forget our tears of salt; the shame, blame and regret. But, my sweet man, I shall always be in your debt. For we married under these tall ivory elms, the memories just flood, it severely overwhelms. I knew not then that we’d part in the same place where we vowed eternity just us - face to face. Now in these woods I just miss your embrace. So here I am again, the third time this week. I’m anxiously awaiting to see if you’ll peek around our elms to hold me like we did before- For you, my sweetheart, I shall always adore. What more is in store... walking into these woods along the shore. Into the Woods Contest Silent One January 8, 2019

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Date: 1/19/2019 11:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Laura, on a great descriptive and well written poem . :). Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 1/13/2019 11:17:00 AM
CONGRATS to win top. Love
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Date: 1/13/2019 7:39:00 AM
Hi Laura, Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/13/2019 7:19:00 AM
A romantic take on the contest, with a sad feel to it.. Great rhyme and flow to you poem Lu.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 1/8/2019 1:55:00 PM
- Beautiful and sad, Laura - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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