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These Are the Days

(To the melody of 'Those were the Days,' Mary Hopkins, 1968) These are the days, my friend They're all you have, my friend And when they end They're nevermore again So have a blast, my friend, Let go what's past, my friend These are the days, my friend These are the days Think of all the goodness that surrounds you Contemplate the bounty that is yours Revel in the friendship of your loved ones Resist life's tricks and snares and evil lures Fill your world with meaning and adventure Visit places most would dare not go Laugh and smile and love your way each moment Make sure to hug or kiss all those you know Yes, these are the days, my friend Don't think they'll never end You've one life to live To joyously attend So have a blast, my friend Make each day last, my friend These are the days, my friend These are the days! May 30, 2018 146 words Your Choice Max 333 Words Contest Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 6/18/2018 10:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your clever win with a sincere message to the rhythm of a grand song! Well done! :)
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Date: 6/13/2018 2:55:00 PM
you chose a great song to inspire you, I can hear the tune in my head and your lyrics fit so well Gershon, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/11/2018 8:46:00 PM
Nicely done Gershon,congratulations on your well deserved win.. Hugs Eve
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/12/2018 12:18:00 PM
Really appreciate your visit, Eve, and your congrats, as (of course!) you must be way, way, way too young to remember that song ('Those Were the Days'). :) gw
Date: 6/11/2018 5:41:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Gershon :)
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Date: 6/11/2018 1:47:00 PM
Congrats Gershon, on your fine placement in the contest !!!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/12/2018 12:19:00 PM
Appreciated, Mike! ~ Gershon
Date: 6/11/2018 1:10:00 PM
Congratulations Gershon on your placement in my contest. Very clever! I remember the original song well:)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/12/2018 12:20:00 PM
You know, Daniel, it's still a great melody, isn't it?! Thanks for the visit and the comment! ~ gershon
Date: 5/30/2018 7:16:00 PM
Omg, Gerson, you and your beautifully expressive piece are a human-poetic time machine.. Your rhythmic, living in the moment squeezing every drop of love and joy out of life, poem is amazing. You transported me back to nostalgic days of my youth when the tune 'Those Were the Days' was a hit on the radio! Your poem is fantastic, meaningful and inspirational, my friend!! Glad you're back!!! :))) Best wishes for a win ~Susan
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/30/2018 9:25:00 PM
Susan, Susan, Susan, your kind and overgenerous appraisal of my little ditty has lifted me out of the doldrums and sent me soaring...No matter the contest. If my write passes the Ashley test, all is well. Thank you so much. Blessings always, :) gershon

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