There's No Taking Mom's Place

If for one week each man could be mother,
then men might think as mothers think.
	Could you stand the life
	Say of being your own wife?
Dirty dishes do not belong in the sink.

For one week, all men should run the home;
trade places with the cook for a real trip.
	Think of planning every meal,
	mashing potatoes with no peel.
Did you fix the faucet that’s started to drip?

You’d change the beds and clean the clothes,
of rust, blood, and ink there’d be no trace. 
	Be a mind reader at times
	solving children’s crimes,
you’d show your children God and his grace.

Part magician, part clown, part traffic cop,
you’d give birth, nurse all who need care.
	Respond to each cry,
	answer every “why?”,
know how to get bubble gum out of hair.

Of the women I’ve known who’ve been mothers
by men they can’t be supplanted.
	Trade-offs are fun to ponder
	and can make us wonder
why on earth men take mothers for granted.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Jones Avatar
March 27, 2014 at 10:32 PM
Sounds like you appreciate yours...:-) :-) how wonderful....enjoyed this sweet poem..
Poteet Avatar
March 28, 2014 at 6:05 PM
I did while I had her; and I appreciate my daughter-in-law; she is such a good mother to my grandchildren. Thanks for commenting.
Sirak Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 7:49 AM
Awesome poem! Congrats on your win.
Mehta Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 5:52 AM
Lovely and heartfelt poem on mommy. Congrats on the fine win, reason
A   Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 5:33 PM
Reason, A tender loving write... :) Congratulations, with your winning poem, --A very touching topic, sponsored by the Awesome and Sweet Leonora-- Sending hugs ~LINDA
Poteet Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 9:07 PM
thank you, Linda.
Gasun Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 11:41 AM
This is a great poem for mom my dear friend Reason. Congratulations! Thank you so much for sharing and your loving support in my contest! Love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
Poteet Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 8:52 PM
Thank you, Leonora, looking for every opportunity to honor mothers apart from Mother's Day alone. Appreciate your contest and the placement therein.
Bedave Avatar
March 16, 2014 at 9:27 PM
true...but why on earth do men take women for granted period... nice poem my dude
Poteet Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 8:53 PM
good question, Chris, very good question.
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