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Written on February 6, 2024

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Letting him go because he had found another, She loved him completely and there was no other, When he married a friend, her young heart was breaking, But, she let him go, knowing she should not smother. Even though the pure feelings were overtaking, She didn’t let him see this hope that was earthshaking. When time brought them together again, her heart yearned. But, she didn’t see how this love was worth the making. She still loved him, but wasn’t sure her love was returned. He might be her answered prayer, for him she burned. When he kissed her soft lips, passions flowed within her. Silencing every doubt as feelings boiled and churned. Like the blazing sun, his love she’d always prefer. He was a blessing of love, all became a blur, When she held him close, there was no reason for fear. He held her whole heart, her soul would surely concur. She was filled with feelings for this man, such a dear. He brought her passions unimagined, it was clear, Without this love that meant more to her than a dream, Life would be filled with grief, her heart would shed a tear. As time moved past, and they became such a great team, She believed they were meant to be, sure of esteem. All around them, those they knew did a double take. Him who gave them always, is the awesome Supreme. She understood that life might sometimes bring an ache, When time reveals truth, real love will not forsake. Inside, where love is born, aside from the heartbreak, Despite doubts, hearts agree, love is not a mistake.

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Date: 2/9/2024 11:42:00 PM
Such a touching poem Gina. Love is a mystery that I think we will never totally understand. It happens and we are powerless to control it. It has no boundaries and overlooks much, and yes , its never a mistake. Beautiful words dear friend. Keep smiling, Wen.
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Date: 2/7/2024 4:52:00 PM
a lovely poem about the passion and beauty of true, soulful love. Beautiful words...true love is never a mistake
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Date: 2/6/2024 11:38:00 AM
Hi Gina. Best line of all IMO: "He who gave them always, is the awesome Supreme." A circular route that ended well. :)
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Date: 2/6/2024 10:38:00 AM
Hello Regina, Right love is not a mistake. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Date: 2/6/2024 10:38:00 AM
You must have a strong character, to forgive a cheat. I read many stories on YouTube and they never forgive and all end in divorce and revenge..
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Date: 2/6/2024 9:05:00 AM
- We only know when love is real and true... a lovely story, Gina :) - hugs
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