There's No Excuse

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Minichu
Invented by Mohan Chutani, a total of 12 lines (4 stanzas of 3 lines each) Rhyme scheme: Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD. 4th stanza consists of a repeat of 1st line of stanza one, the second line of stanza two, and the third line of stanza three. Syllable count: Stanza one: 6,12,3, Stanza two: 4,8,2, Stanza three: 2,4,1, Stanza four: 6,8,1.

Play with your inner child, to calm anxieties, cut inhibitions loose, fun feels wild. Think tall tales on pirates ships with mother goose, set sails. Come now there’s no excuse; wow! Play with your inner child, on pirates ships with mother goose, wow! (Minichu) 03/29/2022 Let's Minichu on fun Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mohan Chutan

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/8/2022 8:50:00 AM

No compromise, of course! Congratulations!

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/8/2022 10:28:00 AM

Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 4/8/2022 7:48:00 AM

Charming and a very clever write. As adults it is important to draw on our inner child; and what better way, then through our imagination. Truly a FUN write. Congratulations on you win in the contest. :)Paulette

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/8/2022 10:27:00 AM

Thanks, Paulette, you've brought a smile to my day, my friend, Emile.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/29/2022 8:39:00 AM

Exceptionally fine, my friend. You really nailed this one. Good luck in the contest.

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/29/2022 10:35:00 AM

Thanks, Milt, you always make my day, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.