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you only know the me i am the one i am when i’m with you ~ the me that’s mistrusting reserved and holding back i hope one day you’ll get to know the me i want to become with you ~ my mind at ease with trust in heart freed from misgiving and suspicion posted on April 16, 2025

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Date: 4/17/2025 9:16:00 PM
Much food for thought here, Line. For me, at any rate, there's an implacable 'Catch-22' operating. How will 'he' ever know the trusting 'you' when he sees only mistrust?Can anyone possibly 'trust mistrust? Keep 'em coming... ~ Gershon
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Date: 4/19/2025 6:23:00 AM
lol ~ time works in mysterious ways

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