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writing about how depression feels is a therpeutic outlet for me. sending love and peace to everyone out there.

Do you ever feel like There is an emptiness inside you An emptiness That drains the light out of everything? A black hole Life in grayscale Colors faded Flavors muted Voices distant except One voice as clear as day The one voice I don't want to hear It tells me all about: -The pain -The melancholy -The meaninglessness -The never ending repetitiveness of it all It asks me- How will we get through: -This day? -This hour? -This minute? -This life? I have no answers Just tears ****** And yet I always know This is a transient and temporary state I always recognize This somber and dejected voice It is not evil, It's not a liar It's hurt. In pain, and seeking solace Maybe It is a gift and its a curse Its the connection to the Earth Her winter sorrow And her hibernation Perhaps It's this connection Which also brings the Joy, the Giddiness and Brightness Of spring and summer ****** You can move through this pain I know You always do You keep the hope warm In the hearth of your soul The hope that Tomorrow Will be a better day With a little more color a little more music a little more lightness ****** And so it was

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Date: 3/25/2024 1:59:00 PM
Love this poem. It resonated with me on such a deep level. Thank you for sharing this. :)
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edhellinde elvensong
Date: 3/31/2024 9:24:00 PM
thank you for reading!! that means a lot :)
Date: 3/10/2024 6:36:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 3/9/2024 3:15:00 AM
I really liked reading your poem today! Welcome to poetrysoup
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edhellinde elvensong
Date: 3/10/2024 11:09:00 AM
Thank you!!

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