There's a Stranger Here

Staying outside my field of vision,
keeping alive all my suspicions,
that there beyond this sad veil of life,
my new reality, twists the knife.
Rubs salt in the wound, as if to say
"Neener neener, your staying this way".
Most of me, I would say, does believe,
for I have been, cut off at the knees.
Quality of life, strength, endurance.
Gone in the wind, leaving turbulence.
Thoughtful reflection, just keeps it there.
In my mirror, there's a stranger there.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Ryerson Avatar
August 17, 2010 at 6:20 PM
Paula - This is a wonderful, sad and heartfelt poem...I have seen that same reflection a time or two myself and you have put this into words that truly speak to me... also, thank you so very much for honoring my poem in your contest - Tim
Kendrick Avatar
August 17, 2010 at 2:58 PM
Interesting writing that I have read today...I hope that you can see the true self and not a stranger though...Thanks for stopping by my blog and commenting..I appreciate you doing that...Sara
Mehta Avatar
August 17, 2010 at 3:51 AM
Enjoyed reading your unique thoughts, Paula
Bond Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 8:50 PM
Awesome poem,i really enjoyed reading it
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