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There Was a Young Lady From Peel

A voluptuous young lady from Peel Her huge breasts she would try to conceal So she wore baggy tops When she went to the shops But folks stared and asked are they real?

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Cynthia Jones

Date: 4/13/2015 12:38:00 PM

Jan, OMG!!!! I loved this. Not like its anyone's business. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia

Jan Allison
Date: 4/13/2015 12:40:00 PM

Totally fiction write Cynthia - I have to go with the low of my pen ... sometimes it gets me into trouble lol! I have done another poem about this 'lady' it is called 'Juicy Fruit' lol Hugs Jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 9/8/2014 2:33:00 PM

Ha ha, love if Jan :) xx

Jan Allison
Date: 9/8/2014 2:35:00 PM

LOL James *** blushes*** hugs Jan xxx

Robin Davis

Date: 5/1/2014 9:31:00 PM

Jan Such a creative and fun write. Made me laugh and smile. I don't have to worry about big ones, cause you need a microscope to see mine. HEE HEE

Jan Allison
Date: 5/1/2014 11:55:00 PM

Thanks Robin. hugs Jan x

Robin Davis
Date: 5/1/2014 9:32:00 PM

Thank you for the nice comment on my Chicken poem.

Vera Duggan

Date: 3/15/2014 1:15:00 AM

Oh! Jan this is so funny, and true because when you do walk around the shops it is surprising how many woman look like that, I just loved it.............Vera............

Tim Smith

Date: 3/14/2014 8:06:00 PM

This is funny Jan congrats on the wim

Jan Allison
Date: 3/14/2014 8:19:00 PM

Aww thanks for dropping by Tim. Jan xxxx

Roy Jerden

Date: 3/14/2014 4:00:00 PM

Well done! Congratulations!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/14/2014 6:50:00 PM

Thanks Roy. Jan xxx

Skat A

Date: 3/14/2014 12:38:00 PM

Good one Jan, Congratulations, enjoying the win. *SKAT

Jan Allison
Date: 3/14/2014 6:50:00 PM

Thanks for the lovely comment Skat. Jan x

Robert Johnson

Date: 3/14/2014 11:03:00 AM

Lady to girl and add her in last line. Then meter is sweeter. :) Awesome limy, especially for your first one. Congrats. Now go write some more of these gems. Peace. :) And please accept my injections in the spirit in which they are intended. :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/14/2014 11:10:00 AM

Thank you for the advice Robert. I am learning so much since I joined in February. will drop by to read your works later. Hugs Jan xxxx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/14/2014 5:12:00 AM

Congratulations on the fine win in Limerick contest. Lovely humor, jan

Jan Allison
Date: 3/14/2014 5:21:00 AM

Thank you so much for the lovely comment Dr Mehta, I am delighted with 5th place. :-) Jan x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2014 2:03:00 AM

This was quite funny to me. The meter seemed a wee bit off in parts, or I'd have put it even higher. Congrats for your win and thanks for supporting my contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/14/2014 5:19:00 AM

Wow Andrea! This is my first attempt at writing a limerick so I am delighted with 5th place limerick. Many thanks for your kind words. Jan xxx

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 3/12/2014 8:04:00 PM

really like this Jan bawdy and funny hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 3/12/2014 8:14:00 PM

Thanks Shadow glad it made you giggle. Love your name by the way its ace :-)

Alex Frankel

Date: 3/2/2014 4:30:00 PM

Hi Jan - Really love this. I can just imagine a nice Edward Lear style picture to go with it too! best wishes Alex

Jan Allison
Date: 3/2/2014 4:35:00 PM

Many thanks for the kind words Alex - was my first attempt at a limerick. Jan xxx

Roy Jerden

Date: 3/1/2014 12:17:00 PM

Good one! Just baudy enough to be considered a genuine limerick. Cheers, Roy

Jan Allison
Date: 3/1/2014 1:56:00 PM

Thanks for the feedback Roy. Jan xxxx

Jenny Brewer

Date: 2/27/2014 1:36:00 PM

Hi Jan,I love this,It's very good,as good as any I've ever heard before. xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 2/27/2014 1:52:00 PM

Awww thanks Jenny you are too kind. My first attempt at a limerick so I'm quite happy. Jan xxx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/27/2014 8:46:00 AM

Good one, Jan....I'd just show them off....;-) Thanks for your lovely post on my poem....hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 2/27/2014 8:54:00 AM

that made me giggle Eileen! Aww you thoroughly deserve to be Pm xx Jan x

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/27/2014 2:35:00 AM

- A funny limerick Jan - Well done - I hope the day will be good and with more smiles :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)))

Jan Allison
Date: 2/27/2014 3:19:00 AM

Thanks Anne Lise - this is such a contrast to the poem I wrote to mum at 6am this morning. We have an appointment with the memory clinic at 10am guess that's whats on my mind thanks for dropping by Jan x