There Was a Girl and There Was a Boy

There was a girl and there was a boy..... There was a boy and there was a girl They lived together and sing like love birds Their songs are like a surging sea that roll over in our hearts many times Where ever they go, there will be a song from them They could make you happy with their love songs or they could make you cry with their sad songs But they will sing songs for you and me with their hearts Where ever they go, there will be a crowd for them They could make you to dance with their love songs or they could make you to feel with their sad songs But they will make happy you and me with their songs Where ever they go, there will be a love from them They could make you fall love with their love songs or they could make you tear with their sad songs But they will make fall you and me in love with their songs There was a boy and there was a girl Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved @ 2017 Ravi Sathasivam
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Ricci Avatar
May 29, 2017 at 11:34 AM
Hello Ravi. Oh I love this. This is grand poetry and expression. I very much enjoyed your repetition for it made your words and thoughts even more beautiful and meaningful. Honestly. Be proud. Well done completely. E x c e l l e n t
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May 2, 2017 at 12:04 AM
What an enchanting couple they must be to pull on people's heart strings with their songs. :) Thank you, Ravi, for your comment on my poem about my Uncle. I appreciate the moral support. Blessings
Sathasivam Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 3:52 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem my dear friend. Very much appreciated.
Downing  Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 7:41 AM
A very lovely song I enjoyed it this morning :)
Sathasivam Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 3:53 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem my dear friend. Very much appreciated.
Salehi Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 9:17 PM
Very beautiful. I enjoyed the song
Sathasivam Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 3:54 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem my dear friend. Very much appreciated.
Coreggia Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 4:26 PM
Ravi, we are immediately caught in the rhythm of this beautiful love poem/song:) Amitiés
Sathasivam Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 3:54 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem my dear friend. Very much appreciated.
La France Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 2:46 PM
Ravi, sweet and dreamy, i really enjoyed reading your poem today
Sathasivam Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 3:56 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem my dear friend. Very much appreciated.
Roper Avatar
April 24, 2017 at 11:40 PM
Two in love facing together their joy and sadness and sharing with all ~*
Sathasivam Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 3:56 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem my dear friend. Very much appreciated.
Dietrich Avatar
April 24, 2017 at 6:06 PM
Light, sweet and lyrical, Ravi. Very nice.
Sathasivam Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 3:57 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem my dear friend. Very much appreciated.
Callus Avatar
April 24, 2017 at 5:05 PM
Indeed, when two people are in love they are able to deal with both sadness and joy, Ravi. May they sing many lovely songs together! Regards // paul
Sathasivam Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 3:57 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem my dear friend. Very much appreciated.
Andresen Avatar
April 24, 2017 at 11:59 AM
- A song about love ... everyone will be happy ... a beautiful poem, Ravi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sathasivam Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 3:57 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem my dear friend. Very much appreciated.
Trifiatis Avatar
April 24, 2017 at 7:36 AM
May many boys and girls imitate them so joy into the world they bring dear, Ravi! Beautiful optimistic writing my friend!
Sathasivam Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 3:57 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem my dear friend. Very much appreciated.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 24, 2017 at 6:00 AM
Music goes with love and sad songs help to cheer the broken heart. Beautiful Ravi! ; ! 7
Sathasivam Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 3:58 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem my dear friend. Very much appreciated.
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