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There was a girl and there was a boy

There was a girl and there was a boy..... There was a boy and there was a girl They lived together and sing like love birds Their songs are like a surging sea that roll over in our hearts many times Where ever they go, there will be a song from them They could make you happy with their love songs or they could make you cry with their sad songs But they will sing songs for you and me with their hearts Where ever they go, there will be a crowd for them They could make you to dance with their love songs or they could make you to feel with their sad songs But they will make happy you and me with their songs Where ever they go, there will be a love from them They could make you fall love with their love songs or they could make you tear with their sad songs But they will make fall you and me in love with their songs There was a boy and there was a girl Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved @ 2017 Ravi Sathasivam

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Date: 5/29/2017 11:34:00 AM
Hello Ravi. Oh I love this. This is grand poetry and expression. I very much enjoyed your repetition for it made your words and thoughts even more beautiful and meaningful. Honestly. Be proud. Well done completely. E x c e l l e n t
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Date: 5/2/2017 12:04:00 AM
What an enchanting couple they must be to pull on people's heart strings with their songs. :) Thank you, Ravi, for your comment on my poem about my Uncle. I appreciate the moral support. Blessings
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 5/8/2017 3:52:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem my dear friend. Very much appreciated.
Date: 4/27/2017 7:41:00 AM
A very lovely song I enjoyed it this morning :)
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Date: 5/8/2017 3:53:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem my dear friend. Very much appreciated.
Date: 4/25/2017 9:17:00 PM
Very beautiful. I enjoyed the song
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 5/8/2017 3:54:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem my dear friend. Very much appreciated.
Date: 4/25/2017 4:26:00 PM
Ravi, we are immediately caught in the rhythm of this beautiful love poem/song:) Amitiés
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 5/8/2017 3:54:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem my dear friend. Very much appreciated.
Date: 4/25/2017 2:46:00 PM
Ravi, sweet and dreamy, i really enjoyed reading your poem today
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 5/8/2017 3:56:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem my dear friend. Very much appreciated.
Date: 4/24/2017 11:40:00 PM
Two in love facing together their joy and sadness and sharing with all ~*
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 5/8/2017 3:56:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem my dear friend. Very much appreciated.
Date: 4/24/2017 6:06:00 PM
Light, sweet and lyrical, Ravi. Very nice.
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 5/8/2017 3:57:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem my dear friend. Very much appreciated.
Date: 4/24/2017 5:05:00 PM
Indeed, when two people are in love they are able to deal with both sadness and joy, Ravi. May they sing many lovely songs together! Regards // paul
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Date: 5/8/2017 3:57:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem my dear friend. Very much appreciated.
Date: 4/24/2017 11:59:00 AM
- A song about love ... everyone will be happy ... a beautiful poem, Ravi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/8/2017 3:57:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem my dear friend. Very much appreciated.
Date: 4/24/2017 7:36:00 AM
May many boys and girls imitate them so joy into the world they bring dear, Ravi! Beautiful optimistic writing my friend!
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Date: 5/8/2017 3:57:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem my dear friend. Very much appreciated.
Date: 4/24/2017 6:00:00 AM
Music goes with love and sad songs help to cheer the broken heart. Beautiful Ravi! ; ! 7
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Date: 5/8/2017 3:58:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem my dear friend. Very much appreciated.